Payment protectionDetails
- Revisions within the package are free.
- If you do not respond within 3 days of delivery, the work is accepted automatically.
The money is reserved when you pay and released only once you accept the work.
Example result
Explainer video script: a meal-prep delivery service
Scene breakdown
| # | Time | On screen | Voice-over / dialogue |
|---|---|---|---|
| 1 | 0:00–0:08 | Hook. A fridge door opens: half a lemon, ketchup, one sad egg. | "It's 8 pm. You've worked ten hours. And this is dinner." |
| 2 | 0:08–0:20 | Montage: delivery app scrolling, greasy takeaway bag, receipt total $34. | "So you order takeaway. Again. It costs too much, and you still feel tired after it." |
| 3 | 0:20–0:35 | Logo reveal. Bright kitchen, a chef plating a bowl. | "GreenBox Kitchen cooks real food for your week — fresh, balanced, and ready in three minutes." |
| 4 | 0:35–1:00 | Phone screen: choosing 5 meals from a weekly menu. | "Every Thursday you pick your meals for next week. Spicy, vegetarian, high-protein — mix whatever you like." |
| 5 | 1:00–1:20 | Courier at a door on Sunday, cooler bag handed over. | "On Sunday we deliver everything chilled, in one bag, in a two-hour slot you choose." |
| 6 | 1:20–1:40 | Microwave timer: 3:00. Steam, a fork digs in. | "On a weeknight, it's three minutes from fridge to plate. No shopping, no washing up." |
| 7 | 1:40–2:00 | Text cards: "From $9.50 a meal", "Skip any week", "Recyclable packaging". | "Meals start at $9.50. Skip or pause any week. And every container goes in your recycling bin." |
| 8 | 2:00–2:15 | Customer (actor) at a desk, smiling. | Priya: "I stopped stressing about dinner. And I've saved about $200 a month." |
| 9 | 2:15–2:30 | CTA. Fridge from scene 1, now full of labelled boxes. Website and code on screen. | "Your first week is 30% off with code FIRSTBOX. GreenBox Kitchen — dinner, sorted." |
Production notes
- Total runtime: ~2:30 at a relaxed reading pace (about 300 words)
- Scenes 1 and 9 use the same fridge for a before/after payoff
- Scene 8 can be replaced with a real customer review if you have one
- Music: light, upbeat acoustic; drop it out on the hook line in scene 1
Title ideas
- What's in your fridge at 8 pm? | GreenBox Kitchen
- Real dinners in 3 minutes — how GreenBox Kitchen works
- Stop ordering takeaway: a week of meals, delivered
Short cut-down (15 seconds, bonus)
Scene 1 → scene 6 → scene 9 with the line: "Ten-hour day? Dinner's three minutes away. GreenBox Kitchen."
Client: GreenBox Kitchen, a local meal-prep delivery service. Format: 2.5-minute explainer for the website and YouTube. Audience: busy professionals 25–40. Tone: warm, quick, a little funny.
The client and all details are made up.
About this service
Festival programmers, funds and producers often decide whether to read your script from one sentence and one page, and most loglines fail by describing the theme instead of a character who wants something and faces something in the way. We write loglines that name the protagonist, the goal, the obstacle and the stakes, plus a short synopsis and, in the higher packages, a one-page synopsis that tells the whole story including the ending, as funders expect. Each version fits the word limits of common application forms.
What is included
- What you getLogline options, a short synopsis of about 100 words, a one-page synopsis in the higher packages and a director's statement draft in Premium, each with its word count. You get it as text on the order page that you can copy or download.
- Character-driven loglinesGoal, obstacle and stakes in one line
- Short synopsisAbout 100 words for forms
- Ending includedFull story, as funders expect
- Counted to the limitWords counted for every version
- Director's statementA draft in Premium
How it works
- 1MaterialYou paste the script or outline
- 2Pitch textsWe write loglines and synopses
- 3ApplicationsYou paste them into the forms
What we need from you
Your script, treatment or a detailed outline pasted in, the genre and length, where you will submit and any word limits from the application forms.
We will ask you:
- Is it a feature, a short or a series?
- Where will you submit?
- Are there word limits in the forms?
Compare packages
| Packages | BasicLoglines + short synopsis$10 | StandardLoglines + both synopses$20 | PremiumFull pitch texts$39 |
|---|---|---|---|
| Deadline | 1 day | 2 days | 3 days |
| Revisions | 1 | 2 | 3 |
| Logline options | 3 | 5 | 8 |
| Short synopsis (about 100 words) | Yes | Yes | Yes |
| One-page synopsis | No | Yes | Yes |
| Director's statement draft | No | No | Yes |
| Order Basic | Order Standard | Order Premium |
Payment protection
You pay when you order, but the money is released only for accepted work.
- Fixed priceThe package price does not change after you pay.
- The money is reservedWhen you pay, the amount is only reserved. It is released to the service once you accept the work.
- Checked before deliveryEvery result goes through a quality check before it reaches you, and you see it on the order page before accepting it.
- Free revisionsAsk for changes within your brief as many times as the package allows.
- Acceptance after 3 daysIf within 3 days of delivery you neither accept the work nor ask for changes, it is accepted automatically. If you write in the order chat after delivery, the order waits; once we answer, we may start the 3 days again and will say so in the chat.
- Redo or a full refundIf the result does not match your brief and the revisions did not fix it, or the work takes more than twice its deadline, write in the order chat: we will redo the work or refund the payment in full.
Questions and answers
Should the synopsis give away the ending?
Yes, for funds and producers it should, because they judge the whole story. For audience-facing blurbs we can write a separate spoiler-free version within your revisions.
Can you work without a finished script?
Yes, a detailed outline or treatment is enough, as long as it includes the ending.
Who owns the script?
Once the order is complete, you can use it as your own, including for festivals, funding applications and commercial release.