成果範例
Lore document: a cozy fantasy farming game
Setting
Hollowmere is a valley lake that breathes. Each spring the Thaw raises the water and drowns the low fields; each autumn the Ebb pulls it back and uncovers old ruins, shells and seeds. Villagers farm on terraces and floating rafts, and the year is planned around the lake rather than the sun.
History in brief: two hundred years ago the valley was dry, ruled by the city of Merrow. The city dammed the river to grow rich, the dam cracked, and the lake swallowed Merrow in one night. Survivors built the village of Hollow on the hills above. Nobody has dived to the old city in living memory — until now.
Factions
| Faction | Wants | Fears | Player's role |
|---|---|---|---|
| The Terrace Guild | Stable harvests and keeping the old ways | Change; outsiders "stirring the lake" | Main source of farming quests and tools |
| The Raft Folk | Freedom to move with the water; trade with the city downriver | Being pushed off the good shores | Sell rare goods, unlock boat upgrades |
| The Keepers of Merrow | To raise the sunken city's relics and learn why the dam failed | That the truth will blame their own ancestors | Lead the diving storyline |
Key characters
- Ada Fenwick, Guild elder — kind but stubborn; lost her brother to a Thaw flood. Motive: protect the village at any cost.
- Juno Reed, Raft Folk trader — cheerful, always a deal ready; secretly sends money to family downriver. Motive: buy her own boat.
- Brother Cal, Keeper — quiet scholar who found a Merrow diary. Motive: prove the flood was not an accident.
Quest outline: "What the Ebb Gave Back"
- Autumn, week 1: the Ebb uncovers a stone door near your farm. Ada wants it reburied.
- Week 2: Juno offers to trade a diving bell part for 20 lake lilies.
- Week 3: Cal decodes a symbol on the door: the mark of Merrow's dam engineers.
- Choice: open the door now (Cal's way) or wait for Guild approval (Ada's way). Each path changes who helps you in winter.
- Reward: first dive unlocked; a new crop, drowned barley, that grows only underwater.
Lore rules (to keep it consistent)
- The lake never rises outside the Thaw; any "sudden flood" in a story must have a cause
- No magic spells; wonder comes from nature and old engineering
- Merrow's people are never pure villains — they built the dam to end a famine
Client: a two-person indie studio. Game: Hollowmere, a cozy farming and exploration game for PC and Switch. Their idea: "farming on a lake where the water level changes with the seasons."
客戶與所有細節皆為虛構。
關於此服務
成就清單是少數玩家會截圖分享的遊戲文字之一，所以一句平淡的「完成第 5 關」，浪費了開個玩笑、呼應世界觀或下個小挑戰的機會。我們依據您的解鎖條件清單，為成就或獎盃撰寫名稱與說明，說明清楚交代要做什麼，名稱則展現個性。我們也會標示隱藏成就的劇透風險，並讓文字簡短，符合 Steam、Xbox、PlayStation 與行動商店的限制。
包含內容
- 您將獲得於訂單頁面提供的表格，列出每個成就的條件、名稱、說明，並視需要附隱藏版本，可直接貼進您的平台工具。
- 有個性的名稱雙關語、世界觀彩蛋、小挑戰
- 清楚的說明玩家永遠知道該做什麼
- 隱藏版本解鎖前不含劇透的文字
- 簡短文字符合商店與主機的限制
- 獎盃等級視需要建議銅、銀、金
服務流程
- 1需求說明您提供條件與調性
- 2撰寫我們撰寫名稱與說明
- 3交付您取得完成的表格
需要您提供的資料
解鎖條件清單、遊戲類型與調性、可呼應的世界觀或固定玩笑、您發行的平台，以及哪些成就應該隱藏。
我們會詢問您：
- 共有多少個成就？每個成就如何解鎖？
- 名稱應該是什麼調性？
- 您會在哪些平台發行？
- 哪些成就要保持隱藏？
比較方案
付款保障
下單時付款，但只有在驗收成果後，款項才會撥付。
- 固定價格付款後，方案價格不會變動。
- 款項先行保留付款時，金額只會先保留，在您驗收後才會撥付給服務。
- 交付前檢查每份成果在交到您手上之前都會經過品質檢查，您也可以在驗收前於訂單頁面查看成果。
- 免費修改在需求說明範圍內，可依方案允許的次數提出修改。
- 3 天後自動驗收若您在交付後 3 天內未驗收也未提出修改，成果將自動驗收。若您在交付後於訂單聊天室留言，訂單會暫停自動驗收；我們回覆後，可能會重新起算 3 天，並會在聊天室中告知。
- 重新製作或全額退款若成果不符合您的需求說明且修改後仍未改善，或製作時間超過交付期限的兩倍，請在訂單聊天室留言：我們將重新製作，或全額退還款項。
常見問題
你們知道每個平台的確切限制嗎？
我們會讓文字簡短，但限制會變動，所以請告訴我們您的平台工具顯示的任何限制，我們會據此調整文字。
你們可以建議新的成就嗎？
可以，標準版與進階版可依您的機制加入幾個想法。是否採用由您決定。
名稱可以引用電影或網路梗嗎？
輕度致敬可以，但我們避免在商業文字中直接引用受保護的作品名稱或歌詞。
沒有找到您要的答案？