成果範例
Text rewrite: "About us" page of a family bakery for new customers
Before (excerpt)
It all began many, many years ago, back in 1987, when our grandmother Rosa, who had always loved baking ever since she was a little girl growing up in the countryside, decided, after a lot of thinking and with the support of the whole family, to open a small bakery on Mill Lane. In those days there were not so many bakeries around and people really appreciated having fresh bread. Over the years, we have grown a lot and nowadays we bake more than 40 kinds of bread and pastries every day, and we also try our best to use local ingredients whenever it is possible to do so.
After (excerpt)
Baking on Mill Lane since 1987
Rosa opened our first bakery on Mill Lane in 1987 with one oven and three recipes from her village. Today her grandchildren run two shops and bake more than 40 kinds of bread and pastries every morning.
We still work the way she did: long, slow fermentation, flour from a mill 30 miles away and butter from a local dairy. As Rosa put it, "Good bread needs time, not tricks."
For cafés and restaurants
Since 2024 we also bake for cafés. Order by 2 pm and your bread arrives before 7 am the next day, six days a week.
Summary of changes
| What | Before | After |
|---|---|---|
| Length | 1,380 words | 790 words (−43%) |
| Structure | One long story in 11 paragraphs | 4 sections: our story, how we bake, for cafés, visit us |
| Audience | Neighbours who know the family | New customers and café owners |
| Sentences | Average 31 words | Average 14 words |
What was changed:
- Repeated ideas cut (the "love of baking" appeared 5 times; now once, through what Rosa did)
- Vague phrases like "try our best to use local ingredients" replaced with the concrete facts you gave us elsewhere on the page (the mill, the dairy)
- A new section for cafés built only from the wholesale details in your brief (order time, delivery time, days)
- Headings added so a café owner can find "For cafés" without reading the whole story
What stayed exactly the same: the year 1987, Mill Lane, "more than 40 kinds", the 30-mile distance to the mill and Rosa's quote, word for word.
Client: Larkfield Bakery, a family bakery with two shops and a new wholesale line for cafés Input: the "About us" page, 1,380 words, written 10 years ago for neighbours who already knew the family Brief: rewrite for café owners and new customers; keep it warm but shorter and more concrete; keep all dates, numbers and the grandmother's quote unchanged
客戶與所有細節皆為虛構。
關於此服務
三份供應商提案或顧問報告很少採用相同的結構：有的把開辦費藏在附錄、有的按月報價，還有的完全沒提到支援時數。我們從每份文件中擷取相同的重點，例如價格與付款條件、範圍、時程、不包含項目、風險與條件，並將它們並排放進一張表格，標明每項事實出自哪一頁或哪一節。缺漏處會標示為「未說明」，而不是猜測，並提供每一份文件尚不清楚之處的簡短清單。
包含內容
- 您將獲得一張比較表，每份文件一欄、每個重點一列，每個儲存格都附出處，另附主要差異摘要，較高階的方案另有可寄給各方的問題清單。內容以文字形式提供於訂單頁面，並附 Word (.docx) 檔。
- 所有文件採用相同重點每份文件都對照同一份檢查清單閱讀
- 每格都有出處註明頁碼或章節，方便快速核對
- 可比較的數字月費與年費以同一基準呈現
- 標示缺漏標為「未說明」，而不是假設
- 要提出的問題選擇前需要釐清的事項
服務流程
- 1文件您附上或貼上報告或報價
- 2比較我們擷取重點並建立表格
- 3決定您在看清差異後做出選擇
需要您提供的資料
文件格式可為 PDF（含可選取的文字）、Word 或 Excel 檔，或貼上的文字，以及您要做的決定和對您最重要的重點，例如總成本或交付日期。
我們會詢問您：
- 您要用這些文件做什麼決定？
- 表格中必須包含哪些重點？
- 價格需要換算成同一基準嗎？
比較方案
付款保障
下單時付款，但只有在驗收成果後，款項才會撥付。
- 固定價格付款後，方案價格不會變動。
- 款項先行保留付款時，金額只會先保留，在您驗收後才會撥付給服務。
- 交付前檢查每份成果在交到您手上之前都會經過品質檢查，您也可以在驗收前於訂單頁面查看成果。
- 免費修改在需求說明範圍內，可依方案允許的次數提出修改。
- 3 天後自動驗收若您在交付後 3 天內未驗收也未提出修改，成果將自動驗收。若您在交付後於訂單聊天室留言，訂單會暫停自動驗收；我們回覆後，可能會重新起算 3 天，並會在聊天室中告知。
- 重新製作或全額退款若成果不符合您的需求說明且修改後仍未改善，或製作時間超過交付期限的兩倍，請在訂單聊天室留言：我們將重新製作，或全額退還款項。
常見問題
你們會告訴我哪份提案最好嗎？
我們會針對您指定的重點，顯示每一份的優劣之處，並提供差異摘要。選擇仍由您決定，因為這取決於文件中沒有呈現的因素。
可以讀取掃描的紙本文件嗎？
檔案需要有文字層，大多數從 Word 或電子郵件匯出的 PDF 都有。若是掃描檔或照片，請以圖片附上，我們會讀取清晰可辨的內容，或請您貼上文字。
如果文件使用不同的貨幣怎麼辦？
我們會保留原始金額，若您提供匯率，則加上換算後的一欄。我們不會自行查詢匯率。
我可以要求修改嗎？
可以，在您方案的修改次數範圍內，例如新增一列或變更比較基準。
沒有找到您要的答案？