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標準版方案範例
Text rewrite: "About us" page of a family bakery for new customers
Before (excerpt)
It all began many, many years ago, back in 1987, when our grandmother Rosa, who had always loved baking ever since she was a little girl growing up in the countryside, decided, after a lot of thinking and with the support of the whole family, to open a small bakery on Mill Lane. In those days there were not so many bakeries around and people really appreciated having fresh bread. Over the years, we have grown a lot and nowadays we bake more than 40 kinds of bread and pastries every day, and we also try our best to use local ingredients whenever it is possible to do so.
After (excerpt)
Baking on Mill Lane since 1987
Rosa opened our first bakery on Mill Lane in 1987 with one oven and three recipes from her village. Today her grandchildren run two shops and bake more than 40 kinds of bread and pastries every morning.
We still work the way she did: long, slow fermentation, flour from a mill 30 miles away and butter from a local dairy. As Rosa put it, "Good bread needs time, not tricks."
For cafés and restaurants
Since 2024 we also bake for cafés. Order by 2 pm and your bread arrives before 7 am the next day, six days a week.
Summary of changes
| What | Before | After |
|---|---|---|
| Length | 1,380 words | 790 words (−43%) |
| Structure | One long story in 11 paragraphs | 4 sections: our story, how we bake, for cafés, visit us |
| Audience | Neighbours who know the family | New customers and café owners |
| Sentences | Average 31 words | Average 14 words |
What was changed:
- Repeated ideas cut (the "love of baking" appeared 5 times; now once, through what Rosa did)
- Vague phrases like "try our best to use local ingredients" replaced with the concrete facts you gave us elsewhere on the page (the mill, the dairy)
- A new section for cafés built only from the wholesale details in your brief (order time, delivery time, days)
- Headings added so a café owner can find "For cafés" without reading the whole story
What stayed exactly the same: the year 1987, Mill Lane, "more than 40 kinds", the 30-mile distance to the mill and Rosa's quote, word for word.
Client: Larkfield Bakery, a family bakery with two shops and a new wholesale line for cafés Input: the "About us" page, 1,380 words, written 10 years ago for neighbours who already knew the family Brief: rewrite for café owners and new customers; keep it warm but shorter and more concrete; keep all dates, numbers and the grandmother's quote unchanged
客戶與所有細節皆為虛構。
關於此服務
貼上或附上您的粗略筆記、聊天記錄或逐字稿，我們會將它們整理成大家真的會讀的會議紀錄：誰出席、討論了什麼、決定了什麼，以及誰要在何時前做什麼。冗長的討論會濃縮成結論，閒聊內容除非重要否則省略。我們只記錄筆記中出現的決議、負責人與期限，不清楚的地方標為待釐清問題，而不是憑空猜測。
包含內容
- 您會收到什麼含出席者、議程重點、決議、附負責人與期限的待辦事項表，以及待釐清問題清單的會議紀錄，可直接寄出。
- 清楚的結構出席者、議程、決議、待辦事項
- 待辦事項表任務、負責人與期限在同一列
- 清楚陳述決議記錄達成的共識，而非討論花了多久
- 待釐清問題標出缺漏之處，而不是猜測
- 您的範本若您的團隊有固定格式，就依其格式
服務流程
- 1需求說明您貼上或附上筆記與出席者名單
- 2撰寫我們整理紀錄結構並擷取待辦事項
- 3交付您會收到可分享的會議紀錄
需要您提供的資料
貼在需求說明中的筆記、聊天記錄或逐字稿，或手寫筆記的照片、會議日期、出席者，以及您團隊使用的任何範本。文件也可以用 PDF、Word 或 Excel 檔案附上。
我們會詢問您：
- 誰參加了這場會議？
- 這是哪種會議？
- 您有會議紀錄範本嗎？
- 會議紀錄應該正式還是精簡？
比較方案
付款保障
下單時付款，但只有在驗收成果後，款項才會撥付。
- 固定價格付款後，方案價格不會變動。
- 款項先行保留付款時，金額只會先保留，在您驗收後才會撥付給服務。
- 交付前檢查每份成果在交到您手上之前都會經過品質檢查，您也可以在驗收前於訂單頁面查看成果。
- 免費修改在需求說明範圍內，可依方案允許的次數提出修改。
- 3 天後自動驗收若您在交付後 3 天內未驗收也未提出修改，成果將自動驗收。若您在交付後於訂單聊天室留言，訂單會暫停自動驗收；我們回覆後，可能會重新起算 3 天，並會在聊天室中告知。
- 重新製作或全額退款若成果不符合您的需求說明且修改後仍未改善，或製作時間超過交付期限的兩倍，請在訂單聊天室留言：我們將重新製作，或全額退還款項。
常見問題
我可以傳送錄音檔嗎？
本服務依據文字處理，而非音訊。請貼上逐字稿或以 Word 或 PDF 檔案附上，或先訂購逐字稿轉錄服務。
如果我的筆記沒寫誰負責某個任務怎麼辦？
我們會讓負責人欄位留白，並把該任務加到待釐清問題中。我們不會自行指派人員。
會議紀錄可以用和我筆記不同的語言嗎？
可以，請在需求說明中告知您需要的語言。
我可以要求修改嗎？
可以，在您方案的修改次數範圍內。
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