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- Revisions within the package are free.
- If you do not respond within 3 days of delivery, the work is accepted automatically.
The money is reserved when you pay and released only once you accept the work.
Example result
Presentation: investor pitch for a neighbourhood coffee roastery
Slide outline
1. Title — Ember Street Roasters: fresh coffee for the whole east side. Founders' names, date.
2. The problem — Local cafés buy beans roasted weeks ago. Customers notice: 62% of our survey respondents say "freshness" is why they switched to us.
3. What we do — We roast in small batches every morning and sell within 7 days. Three pillars: freshness, transparent sourcing, a café people come back to.
4. Traction — Chart: monthly revenue Jan 2025 → Sep 2026, from $18k to $41k. Key number in large type: +128% in 20 months.
5. Customers — 1,400 loyalty members; 38% visit at least weekly. Quote card from a regular.
6. The market — East side: 3 neighbourhoods, ~60,000 residents, 22 cafés, only 2 roast their own.
7. The opportunity — Wholesale to cafés and offices: 14 businesses already asked to buy our beans.
8. The plan — Second café in Millbrook (lease offered, 1,100 sq ft) + wholesale line with a new 15 kg roaster.
9. Unit economics — Table: average ticket $7.40, gross margin 68%, café break-even at month 9.
10. Financial forecast — 3-year table: revenue $520k → $1.1M; EBITDA turns positive in year 2.
11. Use of funds — Pie chart: fit-out 45%, roaster 25%, working capital 20%, marketing 10%.
12. The team — Two founders, head roaster with 9 years' experience, café manager.
13. Risks and how we handle them — Bean prices (6-month contracts), staffing (training program), slower ramp-up (cash runway of 14 months).
14. The offer — $180,000 for 15% equity; quarterly reports; investor coffee club.
15. Thank you — Contacts and an invitation to a cupping session at the roastery.
Design notes
- Warm palette: espresso brown, cream, ember orange for key numbers
- One message per slide; every number shown in large type with a short caption
- Speaker notes added to slides 4, 9 and 10 with talking points
Client: Ember Street Roasters, a small-batch coffee roastery with one café. Goal: raise $180,000 from local investors to open a second location and a wholesale line. Deliverable: 15-slide PowerPoint and PDF. Below is the slide-by-slide content.
The client and all details are made up.
About this service
A bar or bat mitzvah speech has to sound like a thirteen-year-old wrote it, connect the Torah portion to their own life without sounding like a sermon, and still leave room for thank-yous that do not turn into a list of names. We write the teen's d'var Torah or speech from what they tell us about their portion, interests and family, or a parent's speech and blessing, in a warm voice that fits the family's tradition. You get a script that is easy to read aloud from the bimah or the party stage, with pauses marked.
What is included
- What you getA speech script on the order page and as a PDF to print, written for reading aloud, with pauses marked and extras by package.
- Teen's own voiceWords a thirteen-year-old would say
- Portion to real lifeA link between the parsha and their story
- Thank-yous done wellWarm, short, not a roll call
- Parent's blessingIn Premium, a separate parent speech
- Read-aloud scriptPauses and emphasis marked
How it works
- 1BriefYou share the portion, the teen and the family
- 2WritingWe write a speech in their voice
- 3DeliveryYou get a script to practise with
What we need from you
Whose speech it is (the teen or a parent), the Torah portion and any ideas from the rabbi or tutor, the teen's interests, mitzvah project and personality, people to thank, the community's style (Reform, Conservative, Orthodox or secular) and any time limit.
We will ask you:
- Whose speech is it?
- What is the Torah portion, and what did the rabbi or tutor suggest?
- What should we know about the teen?
- How long should it be?
Compare packages
| Packages | BasicShort speech$10 | StandardD'var Torah or full speech$20 | PremiumTeen's speech and parent's speech$39 |
|---|---|---|---|
| Deadline | 1 day | 2 days | 3 days |
| Revisions | 1 | 2 | 3 |
| Speaking time | up to 2 min | up to 5 min | up to 5 min + 3 min |
| Pauses and emphasis marked | No | Yes | Yes |
| Parent speech | No | No | Yes |
| Order Basic | Order Standard | Order Premium |
Payment protection
You pay when you order, but the money is released only for accepted work.
- Fixed priceThe package price does not change after you pay.
- The money is reservedWhen you pay, the amount is only reserved. It is released to the service once you accept the work.
- Checked before deliveryEvery result goes through a quality check before it reaches you, and you see it on the order page before accepting it.
- Free revisionsAsk for changes within your brief as many times as the package allows.
- Acceptance after 3 daysIf within 3 days of delivery you neither accept the work nor ask for changes, it is accepted automatically. If you write in the order chat after delivery, the order waits; once we answer, we may start the 3 days again and will say so in the chat.
- Redo or a full refundIf the result does not match your brief and the revisions did not fix it, or the work takes more than twice its deadline, write in the order chat: we will redo the work or refund the payment in full.
Questions and answers
Will the rabbi accept this interpretation?
We base the d'var Torah on the portion and the ideas you send, but communities differ, so review the text with the rabbi or tutor before the service.
Can the teen change the wording?
Yes, and they should. It reads best when they practise it and swap any word that does not sound like them.
Can you include Hebrew?
Yes, short phrases or blessings with transliteration, if you tell us which ones.