Payment protectionDetails
- Revisions within the package are free.
- If you do not respond within 3 days of delivery, the work is accepted automatically.
The money is reserved when you pay and released only once you accept the work.
Example result
Sales copy: ads and landing page for a weekend pottery workshop
Core message
You will leave with pieces you made yourself, even if you have never touched a wheel. The small group is the proof: there is time to help everyone.
Ad variants to test
| # | Headline | Text | Angle |
|---|---|---|---|
| A | Your first bowl, this weekend | Two days at the wheel, 6 people per group, 3 finished pieces to take home. No experience needed. | Outcome |
| B | Never touched clay? Perfect. | Our weekend workshop is built for complete beginners. Small group, all materials included. | Fear of being bad at it |
| C | A weekend away from screens | Two days, wet clay and a wheel. Leave with mugs and bowls you made yourself. | Escape |
Call to action on all three: See dates
Landing page
Make your first bowl this weekend
Two days at the pottery wheel in a group of six. You go home with at least three pieces you made yourself, glazed and fired.
[Button] Choose your weekend: $240
What happens over two days
- Saturday: centring clay, opening and pulling your first walls. Most people have a cylinder by lunch.
- Sunday: trimming yesterday's pieces, adding handles and choosing glazes.
- Two weeks later: your pieces are fired twice and ready to collect.
Why six people
With six students and one teacher, nobody waits long for help. When your clay goes off-centre, someone is there to show you why.
What is included
Clay, tools, apron, glazes, two firings, tea and snacks. You only need clothes that can get dirty.
Questions people ask
I'm not artistic. Will I manage? The wheel is a skill, not a talent; the first day is all technique. What if I can't make the dates? Transfer to another weekend free of charge up to 7 days before. Can I come with a friend? Yes. Book two places together and you will share a bench.
Next weekends fill quickly
Six places per group, three groups a month.
[Button] See dates and book
Objections handled
| Objection | Where it is answered |
|---|---|
| "I'll be bad at it" | Ad B, FAQ 1 |
| "$240 is a lot" | What is included, 3 pieces to keep |
| "My plans might change" | FAQ 2 |
Client: Kiln Corner, a small pottery studio running 2-day wheel-throwing workshops for beginners ($240, max 6 people) Buyer: adults aged 28–50 who want a hands-on hobby and have never touched clay Claims the client confirmed: groups of 6 maximum, all materials and two firings included, every student takes home at least 3 finished pieces
The client and all details are made up.
About this service
People buy a course when they can see themselves at the end of it, so a course sales page has to show the result, prove the teacher can get them there and answer the doubts that stop a purchase: time, level, format and refunds. We write it block by block: headline and promise, who it is for and not for, the before-and-after, the curriculum module by module in terms of outcomes, the instructor story, student results (from what you provide), pricing, FAQ and a final call to action. Nothing is invented: results and testimonials come only from you.
What is included
- What you getThe full sales page text for your course, block by block with headline options, curriculum, pricing section and FAQ, as text on the order page ready for your course platform or page builder.
- Promise and headlineThe result in the student's words
- Curriculum as outcomesWhat each module lets them do
- Instructor proofYour story and credentials, briefly
- Objections answeredTime, level, format, refunds
- Pricing blockTiers explained without confusion
How it works
- 1Course detailsYou share the program, results and price
- 2WritingWe write the page block by block
- 3PublishingYou paste it into your course platform
What we need from you
The course topic and who it is for, the result students get, the module list, your background, real student results or reviews, price and tiers, refund policy, start date or access terms, and a link to any current page.
We will ask you:
- Who is the course for, and what can they do after it?
- Which modules or lessons does it have?
- What real results or reviews do you have from students?
- What are the price, tiers and refund terms?
Compare packages
| Packages | BasicShort course page$15 | StandardFull course page$29 | PremiumLong page and checkout$55 |
|---|---|---|---|
| Deadline | 1 day | 3 days | 4 days |
| Revisions | 1 | 2 | 3 |
| Page blocks | up to 6 | up to 10 | up to 14 |
| Headline options | 2 | 3 | 5 |
| Checkout text | No | No | Yes |
| Order Basic | Order Standard | Order Premium |
Payment protection
You pay when you order, but the money is released only for accepted work.
- Fixed priceThe package price does not change after you pay.
- The money is reservedWhen you pay, the amount is only reserved. It is released to the service once you accept the work.
- Checked before deliveryEvery result goes through a quality check before it reaches you, and you see it on the order page before accepting it.
- Free revisionsAsk for changes within your brief as many times as the package allows.
- Acceptance after 3 daysIf within 3 days of delivery you neither accept the work nor ask for changes, it is accepted automatically. If you write in the order chat after delivery, the order waits; once we answer, we may start the 3 days again and will say so in the chat.
- Redo or a full refundIf the result does not match your brief and the revisions did not fix it, or the work takes more than twice its deadline, write in the order chat: we will redo the work or refund the payment in full.
Questions and answers
Can you write testimonials if we have none yet?
No. Made-up reviews mislead buyers. We use a founding-student offer or your own results instead, and leave a spot for reviews later.
Will it fit Teachable, Kajabi or Thinkific?
Yes. The text is split into blocks that match typical page builder sections; you paste each one in.
Is this the same as a course launch plan?
No. The launch plan in this section covers dates, webinars and pre-sales; this is the page people read before they buy.