About this service
We read your fantasy or science fiction manuscript as a demanding genre reader and editor would. Beyond plot, pacing and characters, we look at what makes or breaks speculative fiction: worldbuilding delivered through info dumps, magic or technology that breaks its own rules, too many invented names in the first chapter and a slow prologue before the story starts. Every point comes with quotes from your pages and a way to fix it.
What is included
- What you getA written critique: overall impression, strengths, problems with quotes from your pages and a step-by-step revision plan. Premium adds line edits of the opening.
- Worldbuilding deliveryWhere lore stalls the story
- Rules of magic or techConsistency and real costs
- Names and terms loadHow much the reader must learn at once
- Plot, pacing and charactersWhere the story sags or rushes
- Revision planClear steps for the next draft
How it works
- 1BriefYou send the pages, synopsis and concerns
- 2Reading and critiqueWe read closely and write up the analysis
- 3DeliveryYou get the critique and revision plan
What we need from you
The text or excerpt pasted into the brief, a short synopsis if it is an excerpt, your target readers and what worries you most.
We will ask you:
- What subgenre is it and who is it for?
- Does the book open with a prologue?
- How does the magic or technology work, in short?
- What worries you most?
Compare packages
| Packages | BasicExcerpt up to 2,000 words$20 | StandardUp to 5,000 words$39 | PremiumUp to 10,000 words with line edits$75 |
|---|---|---|---|
| Deadline | 2 days | 3 days | 5 days |
| Revisions | 1 | 2 | 3 |
| Text length | up to 2,000 words | up to 5,000 words | up to 10,000 words |
| Revision plan | Yes | Yes | Yes |
| Line edits | No | No | first 1,500 words |
| Order Basic | Order Standard | Order Premium |
Payment protection
You pay when you order, but the money is released only for accepted work.
- Fixed priceThe package price does not change after you pay.
- The money is reservedWhen you pay, the amount is only reserved. It is released to the service once you accept the work.
- Checked before deliveryEvery result goes through a quality check before it reaches you, and you see it on the order page before accepting it.
- Free revisionsAsk for changes within your brief as many times as the package allows.
- Acceptance after 3 daysIf within 3 days of delivery you neither accept the work nor ask for changes, it is accepted automatically. If you write in the order chat after delivery, the order waits; once we answer, we may start the 3 days again and will say so in the chat.
- Redo or a full refundIf the result does not match your brief and the revisions did not fix it, or the work takes more than twice its deadline, write in the order chat: we will redo the work or refund the payment in full.
Questions and answers
Will you rewrite my story?
No. The critique shows what to change and why; the writing stays yours. Premium adds line edits of the opening.
Can you read the whole series bible?
Send a short summary of the world with the pages. Extra lore counts toward the word limit.
Is my manuscript kept private?
Yes. Your text is used only for your order.