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- Revisions within the package are free.
- If you do not respond within 3 days of delivery, the work is accepted automatically.
The money is reserved when you pay and released only once you accept the work.
Example result
Text rewrite: "About us" page of a family bakery for new customers
Before (excerpt)
It all began many, many years ago, back in 1987, when our grandmother Rosa, who had always loved baking ever since she was a little girl growing up in the countryside, decided, after a lot of thinking and with the support of the whole family, to open a small bakery on Mill Lane. In those days there were not so many bakeries around and people really appreciated having fresh bread. Over the years, we have grown a lot and nowadays we bake more than 40 kinds of bread and pastries every day, and we also try our best to use local ingredients whenever it is possible to do so.
After (excerpt)
Baking on Mill Lane since 1987
Rosa opened our first bakery on Mill Lane in 1987 with one oven and three recipes from her village. Today her grandchildren run two shops and bake more than 40 kinds of bread and pastries every morning.
We still work the way she did: long, slow fermentation, flour from a mill 30 miles away and butter from a local dairy. As Rosa put it, "Good bread needs time, not tricks."
For cafés and restaurants
Since 2024 we also bake for cafés. Order by 2 pm and your bread arrives before 7 am the next day, six days a week.
Summary of changes
| What | Before | After |
|---|---|---|
| Length | 1,380 words | 790 words (−43%) |
| Structure | One long story in 11 paragraphs | 4 sections: our story, how we bake, for cafés, visit us |
| Audience | Neighbours who know the family | New customers and café owners |
| Sentences | Average 31 words | Average 14 words |
What was changed:
- Repeated ideas cut (the "love of baking" appeared 5 times; now once, through what Rosa did)
- Vague phrases like "try our best to use local ingredients" replaced with the concrete facts you gave us elsewhere on the page (the mill, the dairy)
- A new section for cafés built only from the wholesale details in your brief (order time, delivery time, days)
- Headings added so a café owner can find "For cafés" without reading the whole story
What stayed exactly the same: the year 1987, Mill Lane, "more than 40 kinds", the 30-mile distance to the mill and Rosa's quote, word for word.
Client: Larkfield Bakery, a family bakery with two shops and a new wholesale line for cafés Input: the "About us" page, 1,380 words, written 10 years ago for neighbours who already knew the family Brief: rewrite for café owners and new customers; keep it warm but shorter and more concrete; keep all dates, numbers and the grandmother's quote unchanged
The client and all details are made up.
About this service
Many sites grow page by page until visitors can no longer tell in five seconds what the business does, for whom and what to click next. We rewrite your existing pages, such as the home page, services, about and FAQ, so each one opens with a clear statement, uses headings that say something, keeps paragraphs short and ends with a plain call to action, while your facts, prices and keywords stay in place. We work from the text you paste or upload, not from the live site, so nothing on the site changes until you publish it.
What is included
- What you getRewritten text for each page in the order it appears on the page, with headings, button labels and a short note on what changed and why. You get it as text on the order page and as a Word (.docx) file.
- Five-second testWhat, for whom and why you, at the top
- Headings that informNo more "Welcome" and "Our services"
- Calls to actionOne clear next step per page
- Keywords keptWorked in without stuffing
- Same factsPrices, terms and claims unchanged
How it works
- 1PagesYou send the text of each page
- 2RewriteWe restructure and rewrite each page
- 3Hand-offYou paste it into your site builder
What we need from you
The current text of each page, pasted or in a Word or PDF file, the page addresses for reference, who your visitors are, what you want them to do and the keywords to keep.
We will ask you:
- What does your business do, and for whom?
- What should a visitor do after reading?
- Which keywords or phrases must stay?
- Is there a tone to match or avoid?
Compare packages
| Packages | BasicUp to 2 pages$12 | StandardUp to 5 pages$25 | PremiumUp to 10 pages$45 |
|---|---|---|---|
| Deadline | 1 day | 2 days | 3 days |
| Revisions | 1 | 2 | 3 |
| Pages | up to 2 | up to 5 | up to 10 |
| Source length | up to 800 words | up to 2,000 words | up to 4,500 words |
| Summary of changes | Yes | Yes | Yes |
| Order Basic | Order Standard | Order Premium |
Payment protection
You pay when you order, but the money is released only for accepted work.
- Fixed priceThe package price does not change after you pay.
- The money is reservedWhen you pay, the amount is only reserved. It is released to the service once you accept the work.
- Checked before deliveryEvery result goes through a quality check before it reaches you, and you see it on the order page before accepting it.
- Free revisionsAsk for changes within your brief as many times as the package allows.
- Acceptance after 3 daysIf within 3 days of delivery you neither accept the work nor ask for changes, it is accepted automatically. If you write in the order chat after delivery, the order waits; once we answer, we may start the 3 days again and will say so in the chat.
- Redo or a full refundIf the result does not match your brief and the revisions did not fix it, or the work takes more than twice its deadline, write in the order chat: we will redo the work or refund the payment in full.
Questions and answers
Can you just take the text from my site link?
Please paste or upload it. We work from the text you send, which also lets you leave out pages you are happy with.
Will this change my search rankings?
Clearer pages often help, and we keep your keywords, but no one can promise positions. Keep the page addresses unchanged when you publish.
Do you redesign the pages?
No, only the text. If a section would work better as a list or a short FAQ, we suggest it in the notes.