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Example result
Manuscript critique: opening chapters of a small-town mystery
Overall impression
The voice is the strongest thing here: warm, a little wry, with a clear sense of the harbour town. The mystery itself starts too late. The body is found on page 19; until then we have two chapters of setup that are pleasant but low on tension.
Plot and structure
- Chapter 1 introduces Nell's bookshop, her cat, her ex-husband and the festival committee. Four threads at once, none with a question attached.
- The lighthouse keeper's death would work far better as the end of chapter 1, not the middle of chapter 3.
- The festival deadline is a good ticking clock. Mention it early and keep returning to it.
Characters and dialogue
Nell is likeable, but mostly passive in the opening: things happen near her rather than because of her. Give her one small choice in chapter 1 that has consequences later.
Dialogue is natural, but characters often explain what both already know:
"As you know, Nell, the lighthouse has been closed since the storm three years ago."
Suggested: "Still closed?" Nell nodded at the lighthouse. "Three years, and they still haven't fixed the door."
Style and language
- Strong sensory details: "the smell of tar and lemon soap" sets the scene in six words.
- Overuse of "just" (41 times) and "suddenly" (12 times) softens tension.
- Several long paragraphs of backstory in chapter 2 (pp. 11–13) stop the scene; spread them across later chapters.
What works
- The cat, Admiral, is a charming running joke without stealing scenes
- The town feels lived in; secondary characters are distinct from first appearance
- Nell's humour fits the genre perfectly
Revision plan
- Move the discovery of the body to the end of chapter 1; cut or compress what comes before
- Give Nell a decision in chapter 1 (e.g., she lends the keeper a book that is later found with him)
- Remove "as you know" exchanges; let the reader infer
- Search and trim "just" and "suddenly" by at least half
- Move backstory from chapter 2 into short flashes later in the book
- Plant the festival deadline in the first two pages
Client: first-time novelist. Text: chapters 1–3 of The Lantern Keeper, a cozy mystery, 4,800 words. Author's question: "Does the opening hook readers, and is my detective likeable?"
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About this service
A poetry collection or chapbook is judged both poem by poem and as a whole: its order, its recurring images and whether the book has an arc. We read each poem for imagery, sound, line breaks, rhythm or meter, and endings, and point out where clichés, abstractions or over-explaining weaken it. Then we look at the sequence and suggest which poems lead, which group together and which may be left out.
What is included
- What you getA written critique with notes on each poem, an overall view of the collection and a suggested order, as text and a .docx file. Premium adds line-level notes on selected poems.
- Poem by poemImagery, sound and endings
- Line breaks and rhythmWhere the line helps or fights the sense
- Collection arcThemes and images across the book
- Suggested orderOpeners, sections and closers
- Clichés flaggedWith what to try instead
How it works
- 1UploadYou paste the text or attach Word or PDF
- 2ReadingWe read each poem and the whole
- 3DeliveryYou get the critique as text and .docx
What we need from you
The poems pasted or attached as Word or PDF in your intended order, the working title, whether it is for a contest, a journal submission or self-publishing, and the poets you feel close to.
We will ask you:
- Is it free verse, formal verse or a mix?
- What is the collection for?
- Which poems are you least sure about?
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| Packages | BasicUp to 10 poems$12 | StandardUp to 25 poems$25 | PremiumUp to 50 poems$45 |
|---|---|---|---|
| Deadline | 2 days | 3 days | 5 days |
| Revisions | 1 | 2 | 3 |
| Poems | up to 10 | up to 25 | up to 50 |
| Sequence notes | No | Yes | Yes |
| Line notes | No | No | 10 poems |
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- Fixed priceThe package price does not change after you pay.
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- Redo or a full refundIf the result does not match your brief and the revisions did not fix it, or the work takes more than twice its deadline, write in the order chat: we will redo the work or refund the payment in full.
Questions and answers
Will you rewrite my poems?
No. We explain what works and what to try, and the poems stay yours. Premium line notes suggest options for specific lines.
Can you critique poems in Russian or other languages?
Yes, in common languages. Sound and meter notes are written for the language of the poems.
Will you edit my file directly?
No. The critique comes as a separate text and .docx file. Line edits are shown as before-and-after passages, not as tracked changes in your manuscript.