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成果範例
Email sequence: 3-email welcome series for a sourdough baking course
Sending plan
| When | Job | |
|---|---|---|
| 1 | Right after sign-up | Deliver the guide, set expectations |
| 2 | Day 3 | Solve the most common starter problem, build trust |
| 3 | Day 6 | Offer the course with a 48-hour welcome price |
Email 1: Your starter guide is here
Subject A: Your 7-day starter guide (and one tip before you begin) Subject B: {first_name}, day 1 starts with flour and water Preview: The one thing most beginners get wrong on day one.
Hi {first_name},
Here is your guide: Starter in 7 days. Print it or keep it on your phone next to the jar.
One tip before you begin: use a jar with straight sides and put a rubber band at the level of the starter after each feeding. In a few hours you will see exactly how much it rose, with no guessing.
Over the next week I will send you two short emails: one to fix the problem almost everyone hits on day 3, and one about baking your first loaf.
[Button] Download the guide
Happy feeding, Maya, Rise & Crumb
Email 2: Why your starter went quiet on day 3
Subject A: Day 3 and nothing is happening? Good. Subject B: The day-3 slump, explained in 2 minutes Preview: It is not dead. Here is what is going on.
Hi {first_name},
If your starter bubbled like mad on day 2 and then went flat, you are not doing anything wrong. The first bacteria to wake up are not the ones that make bread rise; they fade, and the yeast takes over around day 4 or 5.
What to do:
- Keep feeding at the same time each day.
- Move the jar somewhere around 24–26 °C (the top of the fridge works).
- Swap 20% of the flour for whole wheat to give it more to eat.
[Button] Watch the 3-minute feeding demo
Email 3: Your first loaf, with a welcome price
Subject A: Ready to bake? Your welcome price ends Thursday Subject B: From a jar of starter to a crusty loaf Preview: 12 lessons, $69 for the next 48 hours.
Hi {first_name},
Your starter should be lively by now. The next step is the part the guide cannot show you: shaping, scoring and the bake itself.
The full course has 12 video lessons, a printable baking schedule and a troubleshooting section for flat, dense or sour loaves. For the next 48 hours it is $69 instead of $89.
[Button] Join the course for $69
Personalization fields: {first_name}, {signup_date}, {offer_deadline}.
Client: Rise & Crumb, an online sourdough course for home bakers ($89, lifetime access) Audience: people who downloaded the free "Starter in 7 days" guide Goal: turn new subscribers into course buyers within 6 days
客戶與所有細節皆為虛構。
關於此服務
多數學員樂於留下評價,卻始終沒有動手,而有寫的人也只寫「很棒的課程,謝謝」,說服不了任何人。我們撰寫能引出具體回答的見證工具包:一份簡短問卷,問題能帶出前後對比、恍然大悟的時刻與具體成果;在適當時機(獲得成果後、完課時、溫和的提醒)請求評價的電子郵件;以及能把精彩回答變成銷售頁短篇故事的案例研究範本。問卷中已內建發布同意。
包含內容
- 您將獲得一份見證問卷、附主旨的評價邀請電子郵件與案例研究範本,以文字形式提供於訂單頁面,可直接用於您的表單與電子郵件工具。
- 能問出具體內容的問卷前、後與轉折點
- 邀請電子郵件配合成果與完課的時機
- 內建同意同意公開姓名與照片
- 案例研究範本把一則回答變成短篇故事
- 誠實的獎勵保持公平的感謝措辭
服務流程
- 1課程您描述成果與時間點
- 2撰寫我們撰寫問卷、電子郵件與範本
- 3蒐集由您發送並蒐集評價
需要您提供的資料
課程及其主要成果、學員通常何時看到第一個成果、您如何聯繫學員(電子郵件、社群、平台訊息)、您打算如何運用見證,以及您是否為評價提供感謝禮。
我們會詢問您:
- 學員從課程中獲得什麼成果?
- 學員通常何時看到第一個成果?
- 您會在哪裡發布見證?
- 您會感謝學員留下評價嗎?
比較方案
付款保障
下單時付款,但只有在驗收成果後,款項才會撥付。
- 固定價格付款後,方案價格不會變動。
- 款項先行保留付款時,金額只會先保留,在您驗收後才會撥付給服務。
- 交付前檢查每份成果在交到您手上之前都會經過品質檢查,您也可以在驗收前於訂單頁面查看成果。
- 免費修改在需求說明範圍內,可依方案允許的次數提出修改。
- 3 天後自動驗收若您在交付後 3 天內未驗收也未提出修改,成果將自動驗收。若您在交付後於訂單聊天室留言,訂單會暫停自動驗收;我們回覆後,可能會重新起算 3 天,並會在聊天室中告知。
- 重新製作或全額退款若成果不符合您的需求說明且修改後仍未改善,或製作時間超過交付期限的兩倍,請在訂單聊天室留言:我們將重新製作,或全額退還款項。
常見問題
我可以提供獎勵來換取評價嗎?
許多規定允許提供感謝禮,前提是不取決於評價是否為正面,且有揭露。我們會以這種方式撰寫措辭;請確認您所在市場的規定。
你們會編輯我們收到的見證嗎?
此服務不包含。只要意思不變且經學員同意,縮短真實的見證是可以的。
適合哪種問卷工具?
任何工具都可以:Google 表單、Typeform、Tally 或您課程平台內建的問卷。
沒有找到您要的答案?


