成果範例
Proofreading: annual report of a community garden association
Before and after (excerpt)
Before:
This year the garden welcomed 23 new members, and our waiting list have grown to 41 familys. Thanks to a council grant of £2,400 we replaced the old shed, it's roof had been leaking since 2023. Volunteers put in over 1.200 hours, a new record! The composting area was moved behind plot 14, which means the paths along plots 12-16 is now clear for wheelchairs. Special thanks goes to Margret Hale who organised the Spring Plant sale.
After:
This year the garden welcomed 23 new members, and our waiting list has grown to 41 families. Thanks to a council grant of £2,400, we replaced the old shed; its roof had been leaking since 2023. Volunteers put in over 1,200 hours, a new record! The composting area was moved behind plot 14, which means the paths along plots 12–16 are now clear for wheelchairs. Special thanks go to Margaret Hale, who organised the spring plant sale.
List of changes (excerpt)
| # | Paragraph | Was | Now | Type |
|---|---|---|---|---|
| 1 | 2 | waiting list have grown | waiting list has grown | Grammar: agreement |
| 2 | 2 | familys | families | Spelling |
| 3 | 2 | grant of £2,400 we | grant of £2,400, we | Punctuation |
| 4 | 2 | shed, it's roof | shed; its roof | Punctuation; its/it's |
| 5 | 2 | 1.200 hours | 1,200 hours | Number format |
| 6 | 2 | plots 12-16 is | plots 12–16 are | Dash in range; agreement |
| 7 | 2 | thanks goes | thanks go | Grammar |
| 8 | 2 | Margret Hale | Margaret Hale | Name: spelled "Margaret" on p. 1 and p. 4 |
| 9 | 2 | Spring Plant sale | spring plant sale | Capitalisation, as elsewhere in the report |
Consistency check across the whole report
- Names: "Margaret Hale" (4 times), "Tom Okoye" (3), "Priya Shah" (2), all now spelled the same way everywhere
- Organisation name: "Elm Street Community Garden" used in full the first time, then "the garden"; 3 cases of "Elm St. Garden" changed
- Spelling: British throughout ("organised", "colour", "programme"); 7 American forms changed
- Numbers: thousands with a comma, ranges with an en dash; amounts checked against the finance table on page 5, all match
Not changed (for you to decide)
- Paragraph 6 says "nearly 50 volunteers"; the table on page 5 lists 46. Both can be correct, so we left the wording.
- "Potluck" appears both with and without a hyphen in quotes from members; quotes were kept as written.
Total: 2,684 words checked, 57 corrections.
Client: Elm Street Community Garden, a volunteer-run association with 80 members Text: the 2,700-word annual report for members and the local council Brief: fix errors only, keep the friendly voice; use British spelling; plot numbers and amounts must stay exactly as given
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包含內容
- 您會收到什麼修正後的文案與修改清單，並註明優惠資訊不一致之處以及超出限制的句子。
- 沒有錯誤的文案修正拼字、文法與錯字
- 優惠資訊一致各處的價格、日期與優惠碼都相同
- 字元限制檢查廣告標題、郵件主旨與預覽文字
- 品牌拼寫名稱與大小寫依您的指南
- 風格保留刻意不更動短句與語氣
服務流程
- 1需求說明您貼上或附上文案與優惠資訊
- 2校對我們修正錯誤並交叉核對優惠
- 3交付您會在上線前收到乾淨的文案
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貼在需求說明中的文案或其螢幕截圖、投放位置、優惠資訊，以及任何品牌寫作規則。文件也可以用 PDF、Word 或 Excel 檔案附上。
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- 文案將在哪裡投放？
- 確切的優惠資訊是什麼？
- 有品牌拼寫或風格規則嗎？
- 適用哪些字元限制？
比較方案
付款保障
下單時付款，但只有在驗收成果後，款項才會撥付。
- 固定價格付款後，方案價格不會變動。
- 款項先行保留付款時，金額只會先保留，在您驗收後才會撥付給服務。
- 交付前檢查每份成果在交到您手上之前都會經過品質檢查，您也可以在驗收前於訂單頁面查看成果。
- 免費修改在需求說明範圍內，可依方案允許的次數提出修改。
- 3 天後自動驗收若您在交付後 3 天內未驗收也未提出修改，成果將自動驗收。若您在交付後於訂單聊天室留言，訂單會暫停自動驗收；我們回覆後，可能會重新起算 3 天，並會在聊天室中告知。
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常見問題
你們會讓我的文案更有說服力嗎？
不會，這是校對服務。如果某句看起來薄弱，我們會標示，但不會改寫您的文案。
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可以檢查其他語言的文案嗎？
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我可以要求修改嗎？
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