成果範例
Proofreading: annual report of a community garden association
Before and after (excerpt)
Before:
This year the garden welcomed 23 new members, and our waiting list have grown to 41 familys. Thanks to a council grant of £2,400 we replaced the old shed, it's roof had been leaking since 2023. Volunteers put in over 1.200 hours, a new record! The composting area was moved behind plot 14, which means the paths along plots 12-16 is now clear for wheelchairs. Special thanks goes to Margret Hale who organised the Spring Plant sale.
After:
This year the garden welcomed 23 new members, and our waiting list has grown to 41 families. Thanks to a council grant of £2,400, we replaced the old shed; its roof had been leaking since 2023. Volunteers put in over 1,200 hours, a new record! The composting area was moved behind plot 14, which means the paths along plots 12–16 are now clear for wheelchairs. Special thanks go to Margaret Hale, who organised the spring plant sale.
List of changes (excerpt)
| # | Paragraph | Was | Now | Type |
|---|---|---|---|---|
| 1 | 2 | waiting list have grown | waiting list has grown | Grammar: agreement |
| 2 | 2 | familys | families | Spelling |
| 3 | 2 | grant of £2,400 we | grant of £2,400, we | Punctuation |
| 4 | 2 | shed, it's roof | shed; its roof | Punctuation; its/it's |
| 5 | 2 | 1.200 hours | 1,200 hours | Number format |
| 6 | 2 | plots 12-16 is | plots 12–16 are | Dash in range; agreement |
| 7 | 2 | thanks goes | thanks go | Grammar |
| 8 | 2 | Margret Hale | Margaret Hale | Name: spelled "Margaret" on p. 1 and p. 4 |
| 9 | 2 | Spring Plant sale | spring plant sale | Capitalisation, as elsewhere in the report |
Consistency check across the whole report
- Names: "Margaret Hale" (4 times), "Tom Okoye" (3), "Priya Shah" (2), all now spelled the same way everywhere
- Organisation name: "Elm Street Community Garden" used in full the first time, then "the garden"; 3 cases of "Elm St. Garden" changed
- Spelling: British throughout ("organised", "colour", "programme"); 7 American forms changed
- Numbers: thousands with a comma, ranges with an en dash; amounts checked against the finance table on page 5, all match
Not changed (for you to decide)
- Paragraph 6 says "nearly 50 volunteers"; the table on page 5 lists 46. Both can be correct, so we left the wording.
- "Potluck" appears both with and without a hyphen in quotes from members; quotes were kept as written.
Total: 2,684 words checked, 57 corrections.
Client: Elm Street Community Garden, a volunteer-run association with 80 members Text: the 2,700-word annual report for members and the local council Brief: fix errors only, keep the friendly voice; use British spelling; plot numbers and amounts must stay exactly as given
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關於此服務
在合約中，拼錯的當事人名稱、指向錯誤條款的條文引用，或數字與文字不一致的金額，都可能引發真正的爭議。我們校對合約、服務條款、隱私權政策與內部政策的語言錯誤，並全篇檢查定義詞彙、大小寫、條款編號、交叉引用與金額。我們不會改變法律意義：任何有歧義之處都會標示，由您或您的律師決定。
包含內容
- 您會收到什麼修正後的文件、修改清單，以及另列的標示問題清單，例如失效的交叉引用、未定義的詞彙與不一致的金額。
- 語言錯誤拼字、文法與標點
- 定義詞彙全篇用法與大小寫一致
- 編號與交叉引用每一處「參見第 7.2 條」都指向正確的位置
- 名稱、日期與金額數字與文字相符，當事人與前言一致
- 標示歧義之處列出供您決定，絕不悄悄更動
服務流程
- 1需求說明您貼上或附上文件與當事人名稱
- 2校對我們修正語言並檢查結構
- 3交付您會收到乾淨的文字與問題清單
需要您提供的資料
貼在需求說明中的文件或各頁照片、文件的語言與類型，以及當事人名稱應有的寫法。文件也可以用 PDF、Word 或 Excel 檔案附上。
我們會詢問您：
- 這是哪種類型的文件？
- 文件是以哪種語言與法律體系撰寫的？
- 當事人名稱應該如何呈現？
- 條款編號或大小寫有內部風格規範嗎？
比較方案
付款保障
下單時付款，但只有在驗收成果後，款項才會撥付。
- 固定價格付款後，方案價格不會變動。
- 款項先行保留付款時，金額只會先保留，在您驗收後才會撥付給服務。
- 交付前檢查每份成果在交到您手上之前都會經過品質檢查，您也可以在驗收前於訂單頁面查看成果。
- 免費修改在需求說明範圍內，可依方案允許的次數提出修改。
- 3 天後自動驗收若您在交付後 3 天內未驗收也未提出修改，成果將自動驗收。若您在交付後於訂單聊天室留言，訂單會暫停自動驗收；我們回覆後，可能會重新起算 3 天，並會在聊天室中告知。
- 重新製作或全額退款若成果不符合您的需求說明且修改後仍未改善，或製作時間超過交付期限的兩倍，請在訂單聊天室留言：我們將重新製作，或全額退還款項。
常見問題
這是法律審閱嗎？
不是。我們檢查語言與一致性，而不是條款是否保護您。如需法律意見，請諮詢律師。
你們會更改條款的措辭嗎？
只會為了修正明顯的錯誤。任何可能改變意義的內容都會被標示出來。
我的文件會保密嗎？
會。您的文字只用於您的訂單。
我可以要求修改嗎？
可以，在您方案的修改次數範圍內。
沒有找到您要的答案？