Payment protectionDetails
- Revisions within the package are free.
- If you do not respond within 3 days of delivery, the work is accepted automatically.
The money is reserved when you pay and released only once you accept the work.
Example result
Sales copy: ads and landing page for a weekend pottery workshop
Core message
You will leave with pieces you made yourself, even if you have never touched a wheel. The small group is the proof: there is time to help everyone.
Ad variants to test
| # | Headline | Text | Angle |
|---|---|---|---|
| A | Your first bowl, this weekend | Two days at the wheel, 6 people per group, 3 finished pieces to take home. No experience needed. | Outcome |
| B | Never touched clay? Perfect. | Our weekend workshop is built for complete beginners. Small group, all materials included. | Fear of being bad at it |
| C | A weekend away from screens | Two days, wet clay and a wheel. Leave with mugs and bowls you made yourself. | Escape |
Call to action on all three: See dates
Landing page
Make your first bowl this weekend
Two days at the pottery wheel in a group of six. You go home with at least three pieces you made yourself, glazed and fired.
[Button] Choose your weekend: $240
What happens over two days
- Saturday: centring clay, opening and pulling your first walls. Most people have a cylinder by lunch.
- Sunday: trimming yesterday's pieces, adding handles and choosing glazes.
- Two weeks later: your pieces are fired twice and ready to collect.
Why six people
With six students and one teacher, nobody waits long for help. When your clay goes off-centre, someone is there to show you why.
What is included
Clay, tools, apron, glazes, two firings, tea and snacks. You only need clothes that can get dirty.
Questions people ask
I'm not artistic. Will I manage? The wheel is a skill, not a talent; the first day is all technique. What if I can't make the dates? Transfer to another weekend free of charge up to 7 days before. Can I come with a friend? Yes. Book two places together and you will share a bench.
Next weekends fill quickly
Six places per group, three groups a month.
[Button] See dates and book
Objections handled
| Objection | Where it is answered |
|---|---|
| "I'll be bad at it" | Ad B, FAQ 1 |
| "$240 is a lot" | What is included, 3 pieces to keep |
| "My plans might change" | FAQ 2 |
Client: Kiln Corner, a small pottery studio running 2-day wheel-throwing workshops for beginners ($240, max 6 people) Buyer: adults aged 28–50 who want a hands-on hobby and have never touched clay Claims the client confirmed: groups of 6 maximum, all materials and two firings included, every student takes home at least 3 finished pieces
The client and all details are made up.
About this service
Selling a paid membership is different from selling a one-off product: the visitor has to believe they will get value every month, not just on day one, and cancelling has to feel safe. We write a sales page for your community, club or content membership that shows what a typical month inside looks like, who the members are, what they get in the first week and how the price compares with doing it alone. The page ends with clear plans, an honest cancellation line and an FAQ that answers the objections people raise before joining.
What is included
- What you getSales page copy block by block with headline options, plan descriptions and an FAQ, and in higher packages a welcome email for new members. You get it as text on the order page for Circle, Skool, Patreon, Memberful or your own site.
- A month insideWhat members actually get
- First-week winWhy joining pays off quickly
- Plans and priceMonthly, yearly, founding offers
- Honest cancellationReduces fear of joining
- Objection FAQTime, price, fit, results
How it works
- 1BriefYou describe the membership and members
- 2StructureWe plan the page blocks
- 3CopyWe write the page and extras
What we need from you
What the membership includes each month, who it is for, the price and plans, results or testimonials from members, the cancellation policy and where the page will be hosted.
We will ask you:
- What does a member get each month?
- Who is it for, and who is it not for?
- What are the plans and prices?
- Which platform hosts the membership?
Compare packages
| Packages | BasicShort sales page$15 | StandardFull sales page$29 | PremiumLong sales page and welcome email$55 |
|---|---|---|---|
| Deadline | 1 day | 3 days | 4 days |
| Revisions | 1 | 2 | 3 |
| Page blocks | up to 6 | up to 10 | up to 14 |
| Headline options | 3 | 5 | 5 |
| Welcome email | No | No | Yes |
| Order Basic | Order Standard | Order Premium |
Payment protection
You pay when you order, but the money is released only for accepted work.
- Fixed priceThe package price does not change after you pay.
- The money is reservedWhen you pay, the amount is only reserved. It is released to the service once you accept the work.
- Checked before deliveryEvery result goes through a quality check before it reaches you, and you see it on the order page before accepting it.
- Free revisionsAsk for changes within your brief as many times as the package allows.
- Acceptance after 3 daysIf within 3 days of delivery you neither accept the work nor ask for changes, it is accepted automatically. If you write in the order chat after delivery, the order waits; once we answer, we may start the 3 days again and will say so in the chat.
- Redo or a full refundIf the result does not match your brief and the revisions did not fix it, or the work takes more than twice its deadline, write in the order chat: we will redo the work or refund the payment in full.
Questions and answers
Should the page show a price or say "apply to join"?
For most memberships under a few hundred dollars a month, showing the price converts better. We can write either version.
Will the page bring members for sure?
No copy can promise sign-ups. A clear page helps, but traffic, price and the community itself decide.
Can I use testimonials?
Yes, real ones you send us. We do not invent testimonials or member numbers.