Payment protectionDetails
- Revisions within the package are free.
- If you do not respond within 3 days of delivery, the work is accepted automatically.
The money is reserved when you pay and released only once you accept the work.
Example result
Sales copy: ads and landing page for a weekend pottery workshop
Core message
You will leave with pieces you made yourself, even if you have never touched a wheel. The small group is the proof: there is time to help everyone.
Ad variants to test
| # | Headline | Text | Angle |
|---|---|---|---|
| A | Your first bowl, this weekend | Two days at the wheel, 6 people per group, 3 finished pieces to take home. No experience needed. | Outcome |
| B | Never touched clay? Perfect. | Our weekend workshop is built for complete beginners. Small group, all materials included. | Fear of being bad at it |
| C | A weekend away from screens | Two days, wet clay and a wheel. Leave with mugs and bowls you made yourself. | Escape |
Call to action on all three: See dates
Landing page
Make your first bowl this weekend
Two days at the pottery wheel in a group of six. You go home with at least three pieces you made yourself, glazed and fired.
[Button] Choose your weekend: $240
What happens over two days
- Saturday: centring clay, opening and pulling your first walls. Most people have a cylinder by lunch.
- Sunday: trimming yesterday's pieces, adding handles and choosing glazes.
- Two weeks later: your pieces are fired twice and ready to collect.
Why six people
With six students and one teacher, nobody waits long for help. When your clay goes off-centre, someone is there to show you why.
What is included
Clay, tools, apron, glazes, two firings, tea and snacks. You only need clothes that can get dirty.
Questions people ask
I'm not artistic. Will I manage? The wheel is a skill, not a talent; the first day is all technique. What if I can't make the dates? Transfer to another weekend free of charge up to 7 days before. Can I come with a friend? Yes. Book two places together and you will share a bench.
Next weekends fill quickly
Six places per group, three groups a month.
[Button] See dates and book
Objections handled
| Objection | Where it is answered |
|---|---|
| "I'll be bad at it" | Ad B, FAQ 1 |
| "$240 is a lot" | What is included, 3 pieces to keep |
| "My plans might change" | FAQ 2 |
Client: Kiln Corner, a small pottery studio running 2-day wheel-throwing workshops for beginners ($240, max 6 people) Buyer: adults aged 28–50 who want a hands-on hobby and have never touched clay Claims the client confirmed: groups of 6 maximum, all materials and two firings included, every student takes home at least 3 finished pieces
The client and all details are made up.
About this service
If people visit but do not buy, the problem is usually at one or two specific steps: a headline that does not match the ad, an opt-in that asks too much, a sales page that never answers the main doubt, or a checkout with surprises. Send links to your public funnel pages (or paste their text for pages behind a login) along with your step-by-step numbers, and we review each page against what the visitor needs at that moment. You get the problems in order of impact and rewritten headlines, calls to action and key blocks you can paste in.
What is included
- What you getA step-by-step review of your funnel with the issues ranked by impact and ready replacement copy for headlines, calls to action and weak blocks, as text on the order page.
- Message matchAd promise versus page headline
- Page-by-page notesWhat blocks each step
- Ranked fixesBiggest impact first
- Rewritten copyHeadlines, CTAs and key blocks
- What to measure nextTo confirm the fixes worked
How it works
- 1Your funnelYou send page links, ads and numbers
- 2ReviewWe go through every step as a buyer
- 3FixesYou get ranked issues and new copy
What we need from you
Links to each public page of the funnel in order (or their text pasted), the ad or email that sends traffic, your numbers per step if you have them, the offer and price, and who the buyer is.
We will ask you:
- What are the pages of your funnel, in order?
- Where does the traffic come from?
- What are your numbers at each step?
- Where do you think people drop off?
Compare packages
| Packages | BasicShort funnel review$15 | StandardFull funnel review$29 | PremiumReview with emails$55 |
|---|---|---|---|
| Deadline | 1 day | 3 days | 4 days |
| Revisions | 1 | 2 | 3 |
| Pages reviewed | up to 3 | up to 5 | up to 8 pages or emails |
| Rewritten copy | headlines and CTAs | headlines, CTAs, 3 key blocks | headlines, CTAs, 6 key blocks |
| Priority list | Yes | Yes | Yes |
| Order Basic | Order Standard | Order Premium |
Payment protection
You pay when you order, but the money is released only for accepted work.
- Fixed priceThe package price does not change after you pay.
- The money is reservedWhen you pay, the amount is only reserved. It is released to the service once you accept the work.
- Checked before deliveryEvery result goes through a quality check before it reaches you, and you see it on the order page before accepting it.
- Free revisionsAsk for changes within your brief as many times as the package allows.
- Acceptance after 3 daysIf within 3 days of delivery you neither accept the work nor ask for changes, it is accepted automatically. If you write in the order chat after delivery, the order waits; once we answer, we may start the 3 days again and will say so in the chat.
- Redo or a full refundIf the result does not match your brief and the revisions did not fix it, or the work takes more than twice its deadline, write in the order chat: we will redo the work or refund the payment in full.
Questions and answers
Do you need access to our funnel builder?
No. We never log in. Public pages are read from their links; for checkout or member pages, paste the text or describe what is on them.
Can you review design and page speed?
We focus on copy and structure. Obvious layout issues such as a hidden button are noted, but this is not a technical audit.
What if I have no numbers?
We still review the pages and tell you which three numbers to start tracking so the next review can be precise.