成果範例
Proofreading: annual report of a community garden association
Before and after (excerpt)
Before:
This year the garden welcomed 23 new members, and our waiting list have grown to 41 familys. Thanks to a council grant of £2,400 we replaced the old shed, it's roof had been leaking since 2023. Volunteers put in over 1.200 hours, a new record! The composting area was moved behind plot 14, which means the paths along plots 12-16 is now clear for wheelchairs. Special thanks goes to Margret Hale who organised the Spring Plant sale.
After:
This year the garden welcomed 23 new members, and our waiting list has grown to 41 families. Thanks to a council grant of £2,400, we replaced the old shed; its roof had been leaking since 2023. Volunteers put in over 1,200 hours, a new record! The composting area was moved behind plot 14, which means the paths along plots 12–16 are now clear for wheelchairs. Special thanks go to Margaret Hale, who organised the spring plant sale.
List of changes (excerpt)
| # | Paragraph | Was | Now | Type |
|---|---|---|---|---|
| 1 | 2 | waiting list have grown | waiting list has grown | Grammar: agreement |
| 2 | 2 | familys | families | Spelling |
| 3 | 2 | grant of £2,400 we | grant of £2,400, we | Punctuation |
| 4 | 2 | shed, it's roof | shed; its roof | Punctuation; its/it's |
| 5 | 2 | 1.200 hours | 1,200 hours | Number format |
| 6 | 2 | plots 12-16 is | plots 12–16 are | Dash in range; agreement |
| 7 | 2 | thanks goes | thanks go | Grammar |
| 8 | 2 | Margret Hale | Margaret Hale | Name: spelled "Margaret" on p. 1 and p. 4 |
| 9 | 2 | Spring Plant sale | spring plant sale | Capitalisation, as elsewhere in the report |
Consistency check across the whole report
- Names: "Margaret Hale" (4 times), "Tom Okoye" (3), "Priya Shah" (2), all now spelled the same way everywhere
- Organisation name: "Elm Street Community Garden" used in full the first time, then "the garden"; 3 cases of "Elm St. Garden" changed
- Spelling: British throughout ("organised", "colour", "programme"); 7 American forms changed
- Numbers: thousands with a comma, ranges with an en dash; amounts checked against the finance table on page 5, all match
Not changed (for you to decide)
- Paragraph 6 says "nearly 50 volunteers"; the table on page 5 lists 46. Both can be correct, so we left the wording.
- "Potluck" appears both with and without a hyphen in quotes from members; quotes were kept as written.
Total: 2,684 words checked, 57 corrections.
Client: Elm Street Community Garden, a volunteer-run association with 80 members Text: the 2,700-word annual report for members and the local council Brief: fix errors only, keep the friendly voice; use British spelling; plot numbers and amounts must stay exactly as given
客戶與所有細節皆為虛構。
關於此服務
招募人員經常只用幾秒鐘瀏覽履歷，職稱中的一個錯字或日期不一致，就可能讓它被丟進「不錄取」的那一疊。我們校對您的履歷與求職信，檢查拼字、文法與標點，並查驗拼字檢查漏掉的細節：各職位的動詞時態、條列項目的平行結構、日期與數字格式，以及信中的公司名稱。您的措辭與成就仍然屬於您；我們修正錯誤並指出不清楚之處。
包含內容
- 您會收到什麼修正後的履歷與求職信，以及修改清單，並註明任何不一致的日期、時態或格式。
- 沒有錯誤的文字拼字、文法、標點與錯字
- 一致的時態過往職位用過去式，目前職位用現在式
- 平行的條列項目每一項都以相同方式開頭
- 日期與格式統一日期樣式與一致的數字
- 求職信細節檢查公司名稱、職位與問候語
服務流程
- 1需求說明您貼上或附上履歷與求職信
- 2校對我們修正錯誤並檢查一致性
- 3交付您會收到乾淨的文字與修改清單
需要您提供的資料
貼在需求說明中的履歷與求職信或其照片、您應徵的工作，以及您使用美式還是英式英文。文件也可以用 PDF、Word 或 Excel 檔案附上。
我們會詢問您：
- 您應徵哪個工作或產業？
- 美式還是英式英文？
- 您使用的履歷格式必須維持原樣嗎？
- 履歷是用什麼語言寫的？
比較方案
付款保障
下單時付款，但只有在驗收成果後，款項才會撥付。
- 固定價格付款後，方案價格不會變動。
- 款項先行保留付款時，金額只會先保留，在您驗收後才會撥付給服務。
- 交付前檢查每份成果在交到您手上之前都會經過品質檢查，您也可以在驗收前於訂單頁面查看成果。
- 免費修改在需求說明範圍內，可依方案允許的次數提出修改。
- 3 天後自動驗收若您在交付後 3 天內未驗收也未提出修改，成果將自動驗收。若您在交付後於訂單聊天室留言，訂單會暫停自動驗收；我們回覆後，可能會重新起算 3 天，並會在聊天室中告知。
- 重新製作或全額退款若成果不符合您的需求說明且修改後仍未改善，或製作時間超過交付期限的兩倍，請在訂單聊天室留言：我們將重新製作，或全額退還款項。
常見問題
你們會重寫我的履歷嗎？
不會。我們修正錯誤與不一致之處，並標出薄弱環節。內容與措辭仍由您決定。
你們會保留我的版面嗎？
您會收到順序與區塊相同的修正後文字，也提供 Word (.docx) 檔案。設計過的範本版面不會重建，請將文字複製回您的範本。
也能校對 LinkedIn 個人檔案嗎？
可以。請把標題與關於區塊作為其中一份文件貼上或附上。
我可以要求修改嗎？
可以，在您方案的修改次數範圍內。
沒有找到您要的答案？