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Rewrite casual text into a formal business tone

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Rewrite casual text into a formal business tone

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Example for the Standard package

Text rewrite: "About us" page of a family bakery for new customers

Before (excerpt)

It all began many, many years ago, back in 1987, when our grandmother Rosa, who had always loved baking ever since she was a little girl growing up in the countryside, decided, after a lot of thinking and with the support of the whole family, to open a small bakery on Mill Lane. In those days there were not so many bakeries around and people really appreciated having fresh bread. Over the years, we have grown a lot and nowadays we bake more than 40 kinds of bread and pastries every day, and we also try our best to use local ingredients whenever it is possible to do so.

After (excerpt)

Baking on Mill Lane since 1987

Rosa opened our first bakery on Mill Lane in 1987 with one oven and three recipes from her village. Today her grandchildren run two shops and bake more than 40 kinds of bread and pastries every morning.

We still work the way she did: long, slow fermentation, flour from a mill 30 miles away and butter from a local dairy. As Rosa put it, "Good bread needs time, not tricks."

For cafés and restaurants

Since 2024 we also bake for cafés. Order by 2 pm and your bread arrives before 7 am the next day, six days a week.

Summary of changes

WhatBeforeAfter
Length1,380 words790 words (−43%)
StructureOne long story in 11 paragraphs4 sections: our story, how we bake, for cafés, visit us
AudienceNeighbours who know the familyNew customers and café owners
SentencesAverage 31 wordsAverage 14 words

What was changed:

  • Repeated ideas cut (the "love of baking" appeared 5 times; now once, through what Rosa did)
  • Vague phrases like "try our best to use local ingredients" replaced with the concrete facts you gave us elsewhere on the page (the mill, the dairy)
  • A new section for cafés built only from the wholesale details in your brief (order time, delivery time, days)
  • Headings added so a café owner can find "For cafés" without reading the whole story

What stayed exactly the same: the year 1987, Mill Lane, "more than 40 kinds", the 30-mile distance to the mill and Rosa's quote, word for word.

Client: Larkfield Bakery, a family bakery with two shops and a new wholesale line for cafés Input: the "About us" page, 1,380 words, written 10 years ago for neighbours who already knew the family Brief: rewrite for café owners and new customers; keep it warm but shorter and more concrete; keep all dates, numbers and the grandmother's quote unchanged

The client and all details are made up.

About this service

We turn casual, emotional or chatty text into a clear, formal business tone suitable for clients, partners, officials or management. Slang, emojis, contractions and exclamation marks go, polite opening and closing formulas are added, and complaints become firm but courteous. Your facts, requests and deadlines stay exactly as you wrote them, just stated in a way that gets taken seriously.

What is included

  • What you getThe rewritten text in a formal business tone, a choice of subject line or greeting where relevant and a short summary of the main changes.
  • Formal vocabularySlang and filler replaced
  • Polite structureProper greeting, request and closing
  • Firm, not rudeComplaints and refusals stated calmly
  • Your facts intactDates, amounts and requests unchanged
  • Subject line optionsFor emails and letters

How it works

  1. 1
    BriefYou paste or attach the text and name the recipient
  2. 2
    RewritingWe set the formal tone and structure
  3. 3
    DeliveryYou get the formal version and a change summary

What we need from you

The text pasted into the brief or photos of it, who will receive it, what you want to achieve and how formal the setting is. Documents can also be attached as PDF, Word or Excel files.

We will ask you:

  • Who will receive the text?
  • What should the reader do after reading it?
  • How formal should it be?
  • Is there anything that must stay word for word?

Compare packages

BasicUp to 500 words$10StandardUp to 1,500 words$20PremiumUp to 3,500 words$39
Deadline1 day2 days3 days
Revisions123
Source lengthup to 500 wordsup to 1,500 wordsup to 3,500 words
Summary of changesYesYesYes
Subject line or greeting optionsYesYesYes
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Payment protection

You pay when you order, but the money is released only for accepted work.

  • Fixed priceThe package price does not change after you pay.
  • The money is reservedWhen you pay, the amount is only reserved. It is released to the service once you accept the work.
  • Checked before deliveryEvery result goes through a quality check before it reaches you, and you see it on the order page before accepting it.
  • Free revisionsAsk for changes within your brief as many times as the package allows.
  • Acceptance after 3 daysIf within 3 days of delivery you neither accept the work nor ask for changes, it is accepted automatically. If you write in the order chat after delivery, the order waits; once we answer, we may start the 3 days again and will say so in the chat.
  • Redo or a full refundIf the result does not match your brief and the revisions did not fix it, or the work takes more than twice its deadline, write in the order chat: we will redo the work or refund the payment in full.
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Questions and answers

Will the text sound cold?

Formal does not mean unfriendly. Tell us if you want to keep some warmth, and we balance it.

Can you write an official complaint?

Yes, from your draft: facts, what you ask for and by when. It is not legal advice.

Can you rewrite text in Russian or other languages?

Yes, in the language of your text, following that language's business conventions.

Can I ask for changes?

Yes, within the revisions of your package.

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