成果範例
Lore document: a cozy fantasy farming game
Setting
Hollowmere is a valley lake that breathes. Each spring the Thaw raises the water and drowns the low fields; each autumn the Ebb pulls it back and uncovers old ruins, shells and seeds. Villagers farm on terraces and floating rafts, and the year is planned around the lake rather than the sun.
History in brief: two hundred years ago the valley was dry, ruled by the city of Merrow. The city dammed the river to grow rich, the dam cracked, and the lake swallowed Merrow in one night. Survivors built the village of Hollow on the hills above. Nobody has dived to the old city in living memory — until now.
Factions
| Faction | Wants | Fears | Player's role |
|---|---|---|---|
| The Terrace Guild | Stable harvests and keeping the old ways | Change; outsiders "stirring the lake" | Main source of farming quests and tools |
| The Raft Folk | Freedom to move with the water; trade with the city downriver | Being pushed off the good shores | Sell rare goods, unlock boat upgrades |
| The Keepers of Merrow | To raise the sunken city's relics and learn why the dam failed | That the truth will blame their own ancestors | Lead the diving storyline |
Key characters
- Ada Fenwick, Guild elder — kind but stubborn; lost her brother to a Thaw flood. Motive: protect the village at any cost.
- Juno Reed, Raft Folk trader — cheerful, always a deal ready; secretly sends money to family downriver. Motive: buy her own boat.
- Brother Cal, Keeper — quiet scholar who found a Merrow diary. Motive: prove the flood was not an accident.
Quest outline: "What the Ebb Gave Back"
- Autumn, week 1: the Ebb uncovers a stone door near your farm. Ada wants it reburied.
- Week 2: Juno offers to trade a diving bell part for 20 lake lilies.
- Week 3: Cal decodes a symbol on the door: the mark of Merrow's dam engineers.
- Choice: open the door now (Cal's way) or wait for Guild approval (Ada's way). Each path changes who helps you in winter.
- Reward: first dive unlocked; a new crop, drowned barley, that grows only underwater.
Lore rules (to keep it consistent)
- The lake never rises outside the Thaw; any "sudden flood" in a story must have a cause
- No magic spells; wonder comes from nature and old engineering
- Merrow's people are never pure villains — they built the dam to end a famine
Client: a two-person indie studio. Game: Hollowmere, a cozy farming and exploration game for PC and Switch. Their idea: "farming on a lake where the water level changes with the seasons."
客戶與所有細節皆為虛構。
關於此服務
發行商與基金每週要讀數十份提案，只要第一頁沒有回答這是什麼遊戲、給誰玩、為什麼現在做，以及團隊能不能完成，他們就會停止閱讀。我們依據您的筆記撰寫提案文件：一句話賣點、核心循環與支柱、目標受眾與類似作品、賣點、範圍與平台、團隊、開發進度、里程碑，以及您的需求。數字、預算與日期都由您提供；我們會讓它們容易找到，並在全文保持一致。
包含內容
- 您將獲得於訂單頁面提供的提案文件，含所有標準章節，從賣點與支柱到里程碑與需求；較高方案另附單頁摘要。
- 賣點與支柱一句話說明遊戲，加上三大支柱
- 受眾與類似作品誰會玩，以及他們喜愛哪些遊戲
- 範圍與進度內容、平台與已完成的部分
- 團隊與里程碑為什麼你們能完成，以及何時完成
- 您的需求資金、發行、移植或行銷
服務流程
- 1需求說明您提供遊戲、團隊與目標
- 2架構我們塑造發行商想看的故事
- 3撰寫您取得提案文件
需要您提供的資料
您的遊戲構想與目前建置進度、類型與平台、核心循環、類似遊戲、團隊成員及其過往作品、您願意提供的預算與時程，以及您要向誰提案。
我們會詢問您：
- 您要向誰提案？
- 用一句話說明這款遊戲是什麼？
- 目前已完成什麼？
- 您具體需要什麼？
比較方案
付款保障
下單時付款，但只有在驗收成果後，款項才會撥付。
- 固定價格付款後，方案價格不會變動。
- 款項先行保留付款時，金額只會先保留，在您驗收後才會撥付給服務。
- 交付前檢查每份成果在交到您手上之前都會經過品質檢查，您也可以在驗收前於訂單頁面查看成果。
- 免費修改在需求說明範圍內，可依方案允許的次數提出修改。
- 3 天後自動驗收若您在交付後 3 天內未驗收也未提出修改，成果將自動驗收。若您在交付後於訂單聊天室留言，訂單會暫停自動驗收；我們回覆後，可能會重新起算 3 天，並會在聊天室中告知。
- 重新製作或全額退款若成果不符合您的需求說明且修改後仍未改善，或製作時間超過交付期限的兩倍，請在訂單聊天室留言：我們將重新製作，或全額退還款項。
常見問題
你們會製作提案簡報投影片嗎？
這筆訂單是書面文件。簡報用的投影片文字屬於另外的簡報訂單。
你們會幫我們尋找發行商嗎？
不會。我們撰寫文件；選擇與聯絡發行商由您自行處理。
你們可以估算我們的預算或銷售額嗎？
不行。預算、營收與日期由您提供；我們會清楚呈現，並檢查它們是否一致。
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