成果範例
Lore document: a cozy fantasy farming game
Setting
Hollowmere is a valley lake that breathes. Each spring the Thaw raises the water and drowns the low fields; each autumn the Ebb pulls it back and uncovers old ruins, shells and seeds. Villagers farm on terraces and floating rafts, and the year is planned around the lake rather than the sun.
History in brief: two hundred years ago the valley was dry, ruled by the city of Merrow. The city dammed the river to grow rich, the dam cracked, and the lake swallowed Merrow in one night. Survivors built the village of Hollow on the hills above. Nobody has dived to the old city in living memory — until now.
Factions
| Faction | Wants | Fears | Player's role |
|---|---|---|---|
| The Terrace Guild | Stable harvests and keeping the old ways | Change; outsiders "stirring the lake" | Main source of farming quests and tools |
| The Raft Folk | Freedom to move with the water; trade with the city downriver | Being pushed off the good shores | Sell rare goods, unlock boat upgrades |
| The Keepers of Merrow | To raise the sunken city's relics and learn why the dam failed | That the truth will blame their own ancestors | Lead the diving storyline |
Key characters
- Ada Fenwick, Guild elder — kind but stubborn; lost her brother to a Thaw flood. Motive: protect the village at any cost.
- Juno Reed, Raft Folk trader — cheerful, always a deal ready; secretly sends money to family downriver. Motive: buy her own boat.
- Brother Cal, Keeper — quiet scholar who found a Merrow diary. Motive: prove the flood was not an accident.
Quest outline: "What the Ebb Gave Back"
- Autumn, week 1: the Ebb uncovers a stone door near your farm. Ada wants it reburied.
- Week 2: Juno offers to trade a diving bell part for 20 lake lilies.
- Week 3: Cal decodes a symbol on the door: the mark of Merrow's dam engineers.
- Choice: open the door now (Cal's way) or wait for Guild approval (Ada's way). Each path changes who helps you in winter.
- Reward: first dive unlocked; a new crop, drowned barley, that grows only underwater.
Lore rules (to keep it consistent)
- The lake never rises outside the Thaw; any "sudden flood" in a story must have a cause
- No magic spells; wonder comes from nature and old engineering
- Merrow's people are never pure villains — they built the dam to end a famine
Client: a two-person indie studio. Game: Hollowmere, a cozy farming and exploration game for PC and Switch. Their idea: "farming on a lake where the water level changes with the seasons."
客戶與所有細節皆為虛構。
關於此服務
玩家會略過教學的大段文字，但如果前十分鐘沒搞懂某個機制，就會放棄遊戲，所以新手引導文字必須一次只教一件事，而且字越少越好。我們依玩家遇到各機制的順序，撰寫您的教學提示、工具提示、情境提示、首次彈出視窗與載入畫面小提示，並為各平台的按鈕名稱預留佔位標記。文字短到能放進小型介面框，語氣也配合您的遊戲，無論是溫馨的農場模擬還是嚴苛的 roguelike。
包含內容
- 您將獲得於訂單頁面以表格提供的教學與新手引導文字：觸發條件、文字編號、文字內容與簡短備註，可直接複製到您的在地化表格。
- 每則提示一個重點用一兩行教會一個機制
- 學習順序文字配合玩家遇到機制的時機
- 平台佔位標記鍵盤、手把、觸控的按鈕標記
- 提示與小技巧情境提示與載入畫面小提示
- 文字編號可直接用於在地化表格的表格
服務流程
- 1需求說明您列出機制、操作與限制
- 2撰寫我們依學習順序撰寫提示
- 3交付您取得含編號與文字的表格
需要您提供的資料
遊戲類型與平台、依玩家學習順序列出的機制清單、各平台的操作方式、任何介面字數限制、遊戲調性，以及在需求說明中描述的現有文字或截圖。
我們會詢問您：
- 玩家需要學會哪些機制？依什麼順序？
- 您支援哪些平台與輸入方式？
- 教學框有字數限制嗎？
- 教學應該是什麼語氣？
比較方案
付款保障
下單時付款，但只有在驗收成果後，款項才會撥付。
- 固定價格付款後，方案價格不會變動。
- 款項先行保留付款時，金額只會先保留，在您驗收後才會撥付給服務。
- 交付前檢查每份成果在交到您手上之前都會經過品質檢查，您也可以在驗收前於訂單頁面查看成果。
- 免費修改在需求說明範圍內，可依方案允許的次數提出修改。
- 3 天後自動驗收若您在交付後 3 天內未驗收也未提出修改，成果將自動驗收。若您在交付後於訂單聊天室留言，訂單會暫停自動驗收；我們回覆後，可能會重新起算 3 天，並會在聊天室中告知。
- 重新製作或全額退款若成果不符合您的需求說明且修改後仍未改善，或製作時間超過交付期限的兩倍，請在訂單聊天室留言：我們將重新製作，或全額退還款項。
常見問題
你們可以設計教學流程本身嗎？
我們會建議每則提示出現的位置，但關卡設計與觸發條件仍由您的團隊負責。
你們會先玩過遊戲嗎？
不會，我們不執行遊戲版本。請在需求說明中描述機制與畫面，或附上遊玩影片的連結。
你們也會翻譯這些文字嗎？
每筆訂單以一種語言撰寫。完成表格的翻譯需另外下單。
沒有找到您要的答案？