寫作
成果範例
Sales proposal: office cleaning for a coworking space
Your situation
Maple Hub is growing fast: 40 new members since spring, events three evenings a week and a kitchen that never sleeps. In our walk-through you mentioned three pain points: kitchens that look tired by noon, meeting rooms not reset after events, and a current contractor who skips tasks without telling you.
What we propose
Daily evening clean (Mon–Fri, 7–10 pm) plus a midday kitchen refresh (12:30–1:30 pm), so your space looks good both for morning members and for lunch.
| Area | Daily | Weekly |
|---|---|---|
| Open workspace | Desks wiped, bins emptied, floors vacuumed | Chairs and screens dusted |
| Kitchens (2) | Full clean evening + midday refresh, dishwasher loaded/unloaded | Fridge clear-out every Friday |
| Meeting rooms (5) | Reset to standard layout, whiteboards cleaned | Upholstery spot clean |
| Restrooms (4) | Full clean and restock twice a day | Deep clean of grout and fixtures |
| Event space | Reset the morning after every event | — |
How we make sure it's done
- Checklist per room, signed off each night with a photo of kitchens and restrooms
- A dedicated site supervisor who visits weekly and is reachable by phone
- Monthly 15-minute review with your community manager: what went well, what to change
- If a task on the checklist is missed, we fix it within 24 hours at no cost
Investment
| Package | Monthly price |
|---|---|
| Evening clean, Mon–Fri | $3,450 |
| Midday kitchen refresh | $620 |
| Post-event reset (up to 12 per month) | $540 |
| Total | $4,610 / month |
Supplies and eco-certified products included. No setup fee. 30-day notice to cancel.
Why BrightNest
- 11 shared offices and studios in the city cleaned daily
- Same team on your site every night, so they learn your space
- Average client stays with us 3.5 years
Next steps
- Confirm the scope by November 15
- We run a free trial week starting November 25
- Sign the agreement after the trial if you're happy
Prepared for Maple Hub Coworking by Rachel Moore, account manager.
From: BrightNest Cleaning, a local commercial cleaning company. To: Maple Hub Coworking, 2 floors, 9,500 sq ft, ~120 members. Format: 3-page proposal.
客戶與所有細節皆為虛構。
關於此服務
我們撰寫一頁式投資簡介:在寄出簡報之前先寄給投資人、促使對方想了解更多的簡短文件。單頁涵蓋問題與解決方案、市場、業績進展、商業模式的經濟效益、團隊、募資規模與資金用途,最後附上您的聯絡方式。內容設計成兩分鐘內即可瀏覽完畢,所以每一行都是您提供的事實或數字。
包含內容
- 您會得到什麼一份一頁式簡介文字;較高方案另含寄給投資人的信件,進階版另含第二個版本與追蹤郵件。內容會以文字形式放在訂單頁面,並提供 Word (.docx) 或 PDF 檔案。
- 一頁,每一行都有分量只放事實與數字
- 業績進展優先用戶、營收、成長
- 募資與資金用途金額多少、用在哪裡
- 開場郵件標準版與進階版提供
- 追蹤郵件進階版提供
服務流程
- 1需求說明您提供關鍵資訊
- 2提煉我們挑出能讓投資人想進一步了解的內容
- 3撰寫簡介與郵件
需要您提供的資料
公司的業務內容、階段與業績數字、市場規模(若有來源)、團隊、募資規模、資金用途,以及您鎖定的投資人類型。
我們會詢問您:
- 請用一句話說明您的公司做什麼?
- 您能呈現哪些業績進展?
- 您要募資多少?用於什麼?
- 您打算接洽哪些投資人?
比較方案
付款保障
下單時付款,但只有在驗收成果後,款項才會撥付。
- 固定價格付款後,方案價格不會變動。
- 款項先行保留付款時,金額只會先保留,在您驗收後才會撥付給服務。
- 交付前檢查每份成果在交到您手上之前都會經過品質檢查,您也可以在驗收前於訂單頁面查看成果。
- 免費修改在需求說明範圍內,可依方案允許的次數提出修改。
- 3 天後自動驗收若您在交付後 3 天內未驗收也未提出修改,成果將自動驗收。若您在交付後於訂單聊天室留言,訂單會暫停自動驗收;我們回覆後,可能會重新起算 3 天,並會在聊天室中告知。
- 重新製作或全額退款若成果不符合您的需求說明且修改後仍未改善,或製作時間超過交付期限的兩倍,請在訂單聊天室留言:我們將重新製作,或全額退還款項。
常見問題
投資簡介和簡報是一樣的東西嗎?
不一樣。簡介只有一頁,用來敲開大門;投資人表示興趣之後才會看到簡報。兩者都可在此訂購。
會包含估值嗎?
只有在您提供時才會寫入。許多創辦人會在簡介中省略估值,留待之後再談。
你們會寄給投資人嗎?
不會。需由您自行寄送。投資人名單可另行以獨立服務訂購。
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