寫作
成果範例
Email sequence: 3-email welcome series for a sourdough baking course
Sending plan
| When | Job | |
|---|---|---|
| 1 | Right after sign-up | Deliver the guide, set expectations |
| 2 | Day 3 | Solve the most common starter problem, build trust |
| 3 | Day 6 | Offer the course with a 48-hour welcome price |
Email 1: Your starter guide is here
Subject A: Your 7-day starter guide (and one tip before you begin) Subject B: {first_name}, day 1 starts with flour and water Preview: The one thing most beginners get wrong on day one.
Hi {first_name},
Here is your guide: Starter in 7 days. Print it or keep it on your phone next to the jar.
One tip before you begin: use a jar with straight sides and put a rubber band at the level of the starter after each feeding. In a few hours you will see exactly how much it rose, with no guessing.
Over the next week I will send you two short emails: one to fix the problem almost everyone hits on day 3, and one about baking your first loaf.
[Button] Download the guide
Happy feeding, Maya, Rise & Crumb
Email 2: Why your starter went quiet on day 3
Subject A: Day 3 and nothing is happening? Good. Subject B: The day-3 slump, explained in 2 minutes Preview: It is not dead. Here is what is going on.
Hi {first_name},
If your starter bubbled like mad on day 2 and then went flat, you are not doing anything wrong. The first bacteria to wake up are not the ones that make bread rise; they fade, and the yeast takes over around day 4 or 5.
What to do:
- Keep feeding at the same time each day.
- Move the jar somewhere around 24–26 °C (the top of the fridge works).
- Swap 20% of the flour for whole wheat to give it more to eat.
[Button] Watch the 3-minute feeding demo
Email 3: Your first loaf, with a welcome price
Subject A: Ready to bake? Your welcome price ends Thursday Subject B: From a jar of starter to a crusty loaf Preview: 12 lessons, $69 for the next 48 hours.
Hi {first_name},
Your starter should be lively by now. The next step is the part the guide cannot show you: shaping, scoring and the bake itself.
The full course has 12 video lessons, a printable baking schedule and a troubleshooting section for flat, dense or sour loaves. For the next 48 hours it is $69 instead of $89.
[Button] Join the course for $69
Personalization fields: {first_name}, {signup_date}, {offer_deadline}.
Client: Rise & Crumb, an online sourdough course for home bakers ($89, lifetime access) Audience: people who downloaded the free "Starter in 7 days" guide Goal: turn new subscribers into course buyers within 6 days
客戶與所有細節皆為虛構。
關於此服務
好的投資人近況更新只需兩分鐘就能讀完,並讓對方輕易知道如何幫上忙。我們根據您的原始數字與筆記,撰寫每月郵件,含重點指標、成果、如實說明的不足、現金與資金可支撐期,以及介紹人脈或招聘等具體請求。
包含內容
- 您會得到什麼每月一封附主旨的近況更新郵件;較高方案另含可重複使用的架構,下次您可自行填寫。
- 最上方的重點摘要給忙碌讀者的三行
- 指標區塊以純文字呈現月對月變化
- 成果與低點誠實說明,並寫出您的因應
- 資金可支撐期現金、燒錢速度與剩餘月數
- 具體請求人脈介紹、招聘、建議
服務流程
- 1筆記您貼上數字與重點條列
- 2架構我們將它們整理成近況更新的格式
- 3撰寫我們撰寫精簡、易讀的近況更新
需要您提供的資料
該期與前一期的關鍵指標、主要成果與問題、銀行現金與燒錢速度、接下來的計畫,以及您需要投資人協助什麼。
我們會詢問您:
- 公司處於哪個階段?誰會閱讀這份近況更新?
- 目前對您最重要的指標是什麼?
- 您希望投資人協助什麼?
比較方案
付款保障
下單時付款,但只有在驗收成果後,款項才會撥付。
- 固定價格付款後,方案價格不會變動。
- 款項先行保留付款時,金額只會先保留,在您驗收後才會撥付給服務。
- 交付前檢查每份成果在交到您手上之前都會經過品質檢查,您也可以在驗收前於訂單頁面查看成果。
- 免費修改在需求說明範圍內,可依方案允許的次數提出修改。
- 3 天後自動驗收若您在交付後 3 天內未驗收也未提出修改,成果將自動驗收。若您在交付後於訂單聊天室留言,訂單會暫停自動驗收;我們回覆後,可能會重新起算 3 天,並會在聊天室中告知。
- 重新製作或全額退款若成果不符合您的需求說明且修改後仍未改善,或製作時間超過交付期限的兩倍,請在訂單聊天室留言:我們將重新製作,或全額退還款項。
常見問題
你們會檢查我的數字嗎?
我們採用您提供的數字,並指出任何看起來不一致之處,但數字的責任仍在您。
我可以貼上試算表的資料嗎?
可以,請把資料列以文字複製到需求說明中。試算表檔案本身我們目前無法開啟。
如果這個月表現不好怎麼辦?
直接面對。投資人信任及早帶著計畫回報壞消息的創辦人,所以我們會寫出問題與您的下一步。
沒有找到您要的答案?


