寫作
成果範例
Email sequence: 3-email welcome series for a sourdough baking course
Sending plan
| When | Job | |
|---|---|---|
| 1 | Right after sign-up | Deliver the guide, set expectations |
| 2 | Day 3 | Solve the most common starter problem, build trust |
| 3 | Day 6 | Offer the course with a 48-hour welcome price |
Email 1: Your starter guide is here
Subject A: Your 7-day starter guide (and one tip before you begin) Subject B: {first_name}, day 1 starts with flour and water Preview: The one thing most beginners get wrong on day one.
Hi {first_name},
Here is your guide: Starter in 7 days. Print it or keep it on your phone next to the jar.
One tip before you begin: use a jar with straight sides and put a rubber band at the level of the starter after each feeding. In a few hours you will see exactly how much it rose, with no guessing.
Over the next week I will send you two short emails: one to fix the problem almost everyone hits on day 3, and one about baking your first loaf.
[Button] Download the guide
Happy feeding, Maya, Rise & Crumb
Email 2: Why your starter went quiet on day 3
Subject A: Day 3 and nothing is happening? Good. Subject B: The day-3 slump, explained in 2 minutes Preview: It is not dead. Here is what is going on.
Hi {first_name},
If your starter bubbled like mad on day 2 and then went flat, you are not doing anything wrong. The first bacteria to wake up are not the ones that make bread rise; they fade, and the yeast takes over around day 4 or 5.
What to do:
- Keep feeding at the same time each day.
- Move the jar somewhere around 24–26 °C (the top of the fridge works).
- Swap 20% of the flour for whole wheat to give it more to eat.
[Button] Watch the 3-minute feeding demo
Email 3: Your first loaf, with a welcome price
Subject A: Ready to bake? Your welcome price ends Thursday Subject B: From a jar of starter to a crusty loaf Preview: 12 lessons, $69 for the next 48 hours.
Hi {first_name},
Your starter should be lively by now. The next step is the part the guide cannot show you: shaping, scoring and the bake itself.
The full course has 12 video lessons, a printable baking schedule and a troubleshooting section for flat, dense or sour loaves. For the next 48 hours it is $69 instead of $89.
[Button] Join the course for $69
Personalization fields: {first_name}, {signup_date}, {offer_deadline}.
Client: Rise & Crumb, an online sourdough course for home bakers ($89, lifetime access) Audience: people who downloaded the free "Starter in 7 days" guide Goal: turn new subscribers into course buyers within 6 days
客戶與所有細節皆為虛構。
關於此服務
我們為牙科與醫療診所撰寫提醒與回診郵件:減少爽約的預約提醒、依適當間隔寄出的健檢與洗牙回診提醒、療程後的追蹤關心,以及寄給一段時間沒有預約的病患的溫和訊息。語氣平穩而關懷,不使用令人擔憂的健康宣稱,病患資料僅限於姓名與日期欄位。
包含內容
- 您會收到什麼病患郵件,每封附主旨與預覽文字、預約行動按鈕文案,並說明各封的寄送時機。以文字提供,可貼到您的診所軟體或電子郵件服務中。
- 預約提醒輕鬆確認、改期或取消
- 在適當時機提醒回診依間隔安排健檢與洗牙
- 療程後照護隔天的關懷追蹤
- 久未回診的病患溫和邀請回診
- 重視隱私的文案僅使用姓名與日期欄位
服務流程
- 1需求說明您提供服務、間隔與規定
- 2撰寫我們撰寫平穩清楚的病患郵件
- 3交付您會收到郵件與寄送時機
需要您提供的資料
您的診所類型與服務、您使用的回診間隔、病患如何預約(線上、電話)、取消政策、語氣,以及貴診所對文案內容的任何規定。
我們會詢問您:
- 是哪一種診所?
- 您需要哪些提醒與回診通知?
- 病患如何預約、改期或取消?
- 貴診所有避免使用的字詞或宣稱嗎?
比較方案
付款保障
下單時付款,但只有在驗收成果後,款項才會撥付。
- 固定價格付款後,方案價格不會變動。
- 款項先行保留付款時,金額只會先保留,在您驗收後才會撥付給服務。
- 交付前檢查每份成果在交到您手上之前都會經過品質檢查,您也可以在驗收前於訂單頁面查看成果。
- 免費修改在需求說明範圍內,可依方案允許的次數提出修改。
- 3 天後自動驗收若您在交付後 3 天內未驗收也未提出修改,成果將自動驗收。若您在交付後於訂單聊天室留言,訂單會暫停自動驗收;我們回覆後,可能會重新起算 3 天,並會在聊天室中告知。
- 重新製作或全額退款若成果不符合您的需求說明且修改後仍未改善,或製作時間超過交付期限的兩倍,請在訂單聊天室留言:我們將重新製作,或全額退還款項。
常見問題
郵件會包含醫療建議嗎?
不會。我們只撰寫提醒與您核可的一般照護說明;任何臨床內容都應由您的團隊提供。
這些郵件符合隱私規範嗎?
我們避免在主旨中提到病況或療程,並只使用基本欄位。貴診所須自行對照適用的規範加以確認。
我也能把它們用在簡訊上嗎?
可應要求,我們會為每封提醒另附一則簡短的簡訊版本。
沒有找到您要的答案?


