寫作
成果範例
Email sequence: 3-email welcome series for a sourdough baking course
Sending plan
| When | Job | |
|---|---|---|
| 1 | Right after sign-up | Deliver the guide, set expectations |
| 2 | Day 3 | Solve the most common starter problem, build trust |
| 3 | Day 6 | Offer the course with a 48-hour welcome price |
Email 1: Your starter guide is here
Subject A: Your 7-day starter guide (and one tip before you begin) Subject B: {first_name}, day 1 starts with flour and water Preview: The one thing most beginners get wrong on day one.
Hi {first_name},
Here is your guide: Starter in 7 days. Print it or keep it on your phone next to the jar.
One tip before you begin: use a jar with straight sides and put a rubber band at the level of the starter after each feeding. In a few hours you will see exactly how much it rose, with no guessing.
Over the next week I will send you two short emails: one to fix the problem almost everyone hits on day 3, and one about baking your first loaf.
[Button] Download the guide
Happy feeding, Maya, Rise & Crumb
Email 2: Why your starter went quiet on day 3
Subject A: Day 3 and nothing is happening? Good. Subject B: The day-3 slump, explained in 2 minutes Preview: It is not dead. Here is what is going on.
Hi {first_name},
If your starter bubbled like mad on day 2 and then went flat, you are not doing anything wrong. The first bacteria to wake up are not the ones that make bread rise; they fade, and the yeast takes over around day 4 or 5.
What to do:
- Keep feeding at the same time each day.
- Move the jar somewhere around 24–26 °C (the top of the fridge works).
- Swap 20% of the flour for whole wheat to give it more to eat.
[Button] Watch the 3-minute feeding demo
Email 3: Your first loaf, with a welcome price
Subject A: Ready to bake? Your welcome price ends Thursday Subject B: From a jar of starter to a crusty loaf Preview: 12 lessons, $69 for the next 48 hours.
Hi {first_name},
Your starter should be lively by now. The next step is the part the guide cannot show you: shaping, scoring and the bake itself.
The full course has 12 video lessons, a printable baking schedule and a troubleshooting section for flat, dense or sour loaves. For the next 48 hours it is $69 instead of $89.
[Button] Join the course for $69
Personalization fields: {first_name}, {signup_date}, {offer_deadline}.
Client: Rise & Crumb, an online sourdough course for home bakers ($89, lifetime access) Audience: people who downloaded the free "Starter in 7 days" guide Goal: turn new subscribers into course buyers within 6 days
客戶與所有細節皆為虛構。
關於此服務
多數 B2B 案子在一場成功的示範後停滯,是因為追蹤只是含糊的「想確認一下近況」。我們撰寫重述潛在客戶自身問題與已約定下一步的摘要信,再搭配一組每次都帶來價值的簡短序列:相關案例、對未解問題的回答、給對方主管的資料,以及一封禮貌的收尾信。
包含內容
- 您會得到什麼一份摘要郵件範本,加上附主旨與間隔天數的追蹤郵件,並為潛在客戶資料預留填寫欄位。
- 摘要郵件他們的問題、您的解答、下一步
- 附加價值的追蹤每次提供案例、解答或資源
- 內部推動者的助力可轉寄給主管的簡短摘要
- 收尾信為這件事收尾,往往還能得到回覆
服務流程
- 1需求說明您說明成交流程與常見疑慮
- 2節奏我們規劃每次接觸帶來什麼
- 3撰寫我們撰寫摘要與追蹤信
需要您提供的資料
您販售什麼、賣給誰、一般通話或示範如何進行、之後常見的疑慮、您希望的下一步(試用、報價、合約),以及一兩個客戶案例。
我們會詢問您:
- 您一般的通話或示範是怎麼進行的?
- 潛在客戶停滯時通常怎麼說?
- 通話之後您希望的下一步是什麼?
比較方案
付款保障
下單時付款,但只有在驗收成果後,款項才會撥付。
- 固定價格付款後,方案價格不會變動。
- 款項先行保留付款時,金額只會先保留,在您驗收後才會撥付給服務。
- 交付前檢查每份成果在交到您手上之前都會經過品質檢查,您也可以在驗收前於訂單頁面查看成果。
- 免費修改在需求說明範圍內,可依方案允許的次數提出修改。
- 3 天後自動驗收若您在交付後 3 天內未驗收也未提出修改,成果將自動驗收。若您在交付後於訂單聊天室留言,訂單會暫停自動驗收;我們回覆後,可能會重新起算 3 天,並會在聊天室中告知。
- 重新製作或全額退款若成果不符合您的需求說明且修改後仍未改善,或製作時間超過交付期限的兩倍,請在訂單聊天室留言:我們將重新製作,或全額退還款項。
常見問題
你們可以直接寫在我的 CRM 裡嗎?
不行,我們交付附填寫欄位的文字。您可自行在 HubSpot、Pipedrive 或任何 CRM 中加入為範本。
這也適用於開發信之後嗎?
這組序列適用於您已經聊過的潛在客戶。若是首次接觸,陌生開發序列更合適。
追蹤信之間應間隔多久?
早期通常間隔兩到四個工作日,之後再拉長。您方案中的節奏會逐封設定。
沒有找到您要的答案?


