寫作
成果範例
Email sequence: 3-email welcome series for a sourdough baking course
Sending plan
| When | Job | |
|---|---|---|
| 1 | Right after sign-up | Deliver the guide, set expectations |
| 2 | Day 3 | Solve the most common starter problem, build trust |
| 3 | Day 6 | Offer the course with a 48-hour welcome price |
Email 1: Your starter guide is here
Subject A: Your 7-day starter guide (and one tip before you begin) Subject B: {first_name}, day 1 starts with flour and water Preview: The one thing most beginners get wrong on day one.
Hi {first_name},
Here is your guide: Starter in 7 days. Print it or keep it on your phone next to the jar.
One tip before you begin: use a jar with straight sides and put a rubber band at the level of the starter after each feeding. In a few hours you will see exactly how much it rose, with no guessing.
Over the next week I will send you two short emails: one to fix the problem almost everyone hits on day 3, and one about baking your first loaf.
[Button] Download the guide
Happy feeding, Maya, Rise & Crumb
Email 2: Why your starter went quiet on day 3
Subject A: Day 3 and nothing is happening? Good. Subject B: The day-3 slump, explained in 2 minutes Preview: It is not dead. Here is what is going on.
Hi {first_name},
If your starter bubbled like mad on day 2 and then went flat, you are not doing anything wrong. The first bacteria to wake up are not the ones that make bread rise; they fade, and the yeast takes over around day 4 or 5.
What to do:
- Keep feeding at the same time each day.
- Move the jar somewhere around 24–26 °C (the top of the fridge works).
- Swap 20% of the flour for whole wheat to give it more to eat.
[Button] Watch the 3-minute feeding demo
Email 3: Your first loaf, with a welcome price
Subject A: Ready to bake? Your welcome price ends Thursday Subject B: From a jar of starter to a crusty loaf Preview: 12 lessons, $69 for the next 48 hours.
Hi {first_name},
Your starter should be lively by now. The next step is the part the guide cannot show you: shaping, scoring and the bake itself.
The full course has 12 video lessons, a printable baking schedule and a troubleshooting section for flat, dense or sour loaves. For the next 48 hours it is $69 instead of $89.
[Button] Join the course for $69
Personalization fields: {first_name}, {signup_date}, {offer_deadline}.
Client: Rise & Crumb, an online sourdough course for home bakers ($89, lifetime access) Audience: people who downloaded the free "Starter in 7 days" guide Goal: turn new subscribers into course buyers within 6 days
客戶與所有細節皆為虛構。
關於此服務
我們撰寫飯店、民宿或度假租屋在住宿前後寄出的郵件:訂房確認後的跟進信、含入住資訊的入住前通知與加購推薦(例如提早入住或機場接送),以及退房後的感謝信,邀請住客留下評價並直接回訪預訂。每封郵件都有明確任務,語氣熱情好客,並預留住客姓名與日期的欄位。
包含內容
- 您會收到什麼住客郵件,每封附主旨與預覽文字,個人化欄位已標記,並說明各封的寄送時機。以文字提供,可貼到您的訂房系統或電子郵件服務中。
- 入住前資訊入住、停車與交通指引
- 加購推薦提早入住、接送、早餐
- 邀請評價退房後的禮貌請求
- 直接回訪預訂不經訂房平台,邀請住客再度光臨
- 住客欄位標記姓名、日期與房型
服務流程
- 1需求說明您描述住宿設施與住宿規則
- 2撰寫我們為每個時機撰寫郵件
- 3交付您會收到郵件與寄送時機
需要您提供的資料
您的住宿類型與地點、入住規定與時間、您販售的加購項目、您在意的評價網站、您的語氣,以及給回頭客的優惠(如有)。
我們會詢問您:
- 是哪一種住宿?在哪裡?
- 您想在抵達前販售哪些加購項目?
- 您希望住客在哪裡留下評價?
- 下次直接預訂有提供什麼優惠嗎?
比較方案
付款保障
下單時付款,但只有在驗收成果後,款項才會撥付。
- 固定價格付款後,方案價格不會變動。
- 款項先行保留付款時,金額只會先保留,在您驗收後才會撥付給服務。
- 交付前檢查每份成果在交到您手上之前都會經過品質檢查,您也可以在驗收前於訂單頁面查看成果。
- 免費修改在需求說明範圍內,可依方案允許的次數提出修改。
- 3 天後自動驗收若您在交付後 3 天內未驗收也未提出修改,成果將自動驗收。若您在交付後於訂單聊天室留言,訂單會暫停自動驗收;我們回覆後,可能會重新起算 3 天,並會在聊天室中告知。
- 重新製作或全額退款若成果不符合您的需求說明且修改後仍未改善,或製作時間超過交付期限的兩倍,請在訂單聊天室留言:我們將重新製作,或全額退還款項。
常見問題
這些郵件可以透過 Booking.com 或 Airbnb 的訊息發送嗎?
可以,以文字形式提供。平台會限制訊息中的連結與聯絡資訊,因此我們可應要求提供不含這些內容的精簡版。
可以用多種語言撰寫嗎?
每筆訂單以一種語言撰寫。請在需求說明中指定;如需更多語言,請另外訂購翻譯服務。
你們會幫我設定到 PMS 系統中嗎?
不會。您自行把文字貼到訂房或訊息系統,並設定觸發條件。
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