寫作
成果範例
Business letter: payment reminder to a wholesale client
Version A: polite but clear
Subject: Invoices HOC-0412 and HOC-0419: payment now 34 days overdue
Dear Ms. [Surname],
Thank you again for featuring our autumn mugs in your window display. We have heard from several of your customers who found us through your shop, and we value the partnership.
I am writing about two invoices that remain open:
| Invoice | Date | Amount | Due date |
|---|---|---|---|
| HOC-0412 | 2 September | $1,240.00 | 16 September |
| HOC-0419 | 9 September | $865.50 | 23 September |
| Total | $2,105.50 |
We have not yet received payment for either of them, and our reminder of 1 October went unanswered. If payment has already been sent, please accept our thanks and let me know the date so we can match it.
Could you please settle the total of $2,105.50 by [date, 7 days from sending]? Bank details are at the bottom of both invoices. If a split payment would be easier, reply to this email with a date for each part and we will gladly agree it.
We would like to plan your winter order together, and we can confirm the new collection as soon as the account is up to date.
Kind regards, [Your name] Hollow Oak Ceramics | [phone]
Version B: firm (changed paragraphs)
Subject: Final reminder: $2,105.50 overdue since September
Despite our reminder of 1 October, invoices HOC-0412 and HOC-0419 remain unpaid, now 34 days past their due dates.
Please pay the full $2,105.50 by [date]. Until the account is settled, we are unable to dispatch new orders, including the winter collection reserved for you.
If we do not receive payment or a reply by that date, we will apply the late fee set out in our terms of trade (section 5) and pass the matter to our collections partner.
Notes for you
- Use Version A first. If there is no reply within 7 days, send Version B.
- Fill in the bracketed fields and check that the invoice amounts match your records.
- Only mention the late fee if it really is in the terms the client signed.
Client: Hollow Oak Ceramics, a small pottery studio selling to gift shops Situation: a retail partner has not paid two invoices, now 34 days overdue. The studio wants the money, but also wants to keep the shop as a client. Delivered: one letter in two tones. Version A is below in full; Version B shows the paragraphs that change.
客戶與所有細節皆為虛構。
關於此服務
我們撰寫隨租屋申請一併提交的自薦信,幫助房東或仲介在一堆相似的申請表中選中您。信中簡介誰將入住,用幾行文字呈現穩定收入與良好的租屋紀錄,並在對方提出之前就回應疑慮,例如寵物、新工作或第一次租屋。篇幅簡短、語氣親切,並針對該房源量身撰寫。
包含內容
- 您將獲得一封附主旨的租屋自薦信,可直接簽名,日期與金額的位置已標示供您核對。以文字交付,可直接貼進電子郵件或申請表。
- 誰將入住簡短、討喜的自我介紹
- 用幾行呈現可靠度收入、工作與過往租屋紀錄
- 回應疑慮寵物、首次租屋、近期搬家
- 針對房源量身撰寫這個家為何適合您
服務流程
- 1需求說明您說明房源與您的狀況
- 2信件我們撰寫自薦信
- 3交付您核對細節後寄出
需要您提供的資料
房源資訊與您如何找到它、誰將入住、您的工作與大致收入、租屋紀錄、寵物,以及任何您想說明的事。
我們會詢問您:
- 您要申請哪個房源?
- 誰將入住?
- 房東可能會擔心什麼嗎?
比較方案
付款保障
下單時付款,但只有在驗收成果後,款項才會撥付。
- 固定價格付款後,方案價格不會變動。
- 款項先行保留付款時,金額只會先保留,在您驗收後才會撥付給服務。
- 交付前檢查每份成果在交到您手上之前都會經過品質檢查,您也可以在驗收前於訂單頁面查看成果。
- 免費修改在需求說明範圍內,可依方案允許的次數提出修改。
- 3 天後自動驗收若您在交付後 3 天內未驗收也未提出修改,成果將自動驗收。若您在交付後於訂單聊天室留言,訂單會暫停自動驗收;我們回覆後,可能會重新起算 3 天,並會在聊天室中告知。
- 重新製作或全額退款若成果不符合您的需求說明且修改後仍未改善,或製作時間超過交付期限的兩倍,請在訂單聊天室留言:我們將重新製作,或全額退還款項。
常見問題
我需要提到薪水嗎?
通常以概括方式說明即可,例如收入為房租的三倍。只提供您覺得自在的內容。
可以用其他語言撰寫嗎?
可以,請用房東閱讀的語言撰寫。
這能讓我租到房子嗎?
一封好的信能讓您脫穎而出,但決定權在房東。
沒有找到您要的答案?


