寫作
成果範例
Email sequence: 3-email welcome series for a sourdough baking course
Sending plan
| When | Job | |
|---|---|---|
| 1 | Right after sign-up | Deliver the guide, set expectations |
| 2 | Day 3 | Solve the most common starter problem, build trust |
| 3 | Day 6 | Offer the course with a 48-hour welcome price |
Email 1: Your starter guide is here
Subject A: Your 7-day starter guide (and one tip before you begin) Subject B: {first_name}, day 1 starts with flour and water Preview: The one thing most beginners get wrong on day one.
Hi {first_name},
Here is your guide: Starter in 7 days. Print it or keep it on your phone next to the jar.
One tip before you begin: use a jar with straight sides and put a rubber band at the level of the starter after each feeding. In a few hours you will see exactly how much it rose, with no guessing.
Over the next week I will send you two short emails: one to fix the problem almost everyone hits on day 3, and one about baking your first loaf.
[Button] Download the guide
Happy feeding, Maya, Rise & Crumb
Email 2: Why your starter went quiet on day 3
Subject A: Day 3 and nothing is happening? Good. Subject B: The day-3 slump, explained in 2 minutes Preview: It is not dead. Here is what is going on.
Hi {first_name},
If your starter bubbled like mad on day 2 and then went flat, you are not doing anything wrong. The first bacteria to wake up are not the ones that make bread rise; they fade, and the yeast takes over around day 4 or 5.
What to do:
- Keep feeding at the same time each day.
- Move the jar somewhere around 24–26 °C (the top of the fridge works).
- Swap 20% of the flour for whole wheat to give it more to eat.
[Button] Watch the 3-minute feeding demo
Email 3: Your first loaf, with a welcome price
Subject A: Ready to bake? Your welcome price ends Thursday Subject B: From a jar of starter to a crusty loaf Preview: 12 lessons, $69 for the next 48 hours.
Hi {first_name},
Your starter should be lively by now. The next step is the part the guide cannot show you: shaping, scoring and the bake itself.
The full course has 12 video lessons, a printable baking schedule and a troubleshooting section for flat, dense or sour loaves. For the next 48 hours it is $69 instead of $89.
[Button] Join the course for $69
Personalization fields: {first_name}, {signup_date}, {offer_deadline}.
Client: Rise & Crumb, an online sourdough course for home bakers ($89, lifetime access) Audience: people who downloaded the free "Starter in 7 days" guide Goal: turn new subscribers into course buyers within 6 days
客戶與所有細節皆為虛構。
關於此服務
有人剛下載了您的檢查表、指南或範本,而其中大多數人永遠不會打開它。我們撰寫的序列會先促使對方使用這份贈品,再以每封一個實用想法持續延伸,並在不於第一天強力推銷的前提下,引導讀者走向您的付費產品。
包含內容
- 您會得到什麼一組附主旨、預覽文字與寄送時程的培育郵件序列,最後一封提出明確的方案。
- 交付郵件附連結,以及今天就打開的理由
- 快速見效郵件讀者可以立刻採取的一個步驟
- 故事與佐證將贈品與您的方案連結起來的案例或成果
- 方案郵件明確的價格、期限或下一步
- 寄送時程郵件之間的間隔天數
服務流程
- 1需求說明您說明贈品與付費方案
- 2銜接我們規劃每封郵件如何從贈品銜接到方案
- 3撰寫我們撰寫序列與時程
需要您提供的資料
引流贈品是什麼、裡面有什麼內容、誰會下載、之後您販售什麼,以及該方案的價格或形式。
我們會詢問您:
- 引流贈品是什麼?它解決什麼問題?
- 引流贈品之後您販售什麼?
- 有哪些疑慮讓人不購買?
比較方案
付款保障
下單時付款,但只有在驗收成果後,款項才會撥付。
- 固定價格付款後,方案價格不會變動。
- 款項先行保留付款時,金額只會先保留,在您驗收後才會撥付給服務。
- 交付前檢查每份成果在交到您手上之前都會經過品質檢查,您也可以在驗收前於訂單頁面查看成果。
- 免費修改在需求說明範圍內,可依方案允許的次數提出修改。
- 3 天後自動驗收若您在交付後 3 天內未驗收也未提出修改,成果將自動驗收。若您在交付後於訂單聊天室留言,訂單會暫停自動驗收;我們回覆後,可能會重新起算 3 天,並會在聊天室中告知。
- 重新製作或全額退款若成果不符合您的需求說明且修改後仍未改善,或製作時間超過交付期限的兩倍,請在訂單聊天室留言:我們將重新製作,或全額退還款項。
常見問題
你們也能撰寫引流贈品本身嗎?
這項訂單不含此項。我們是圍繞您已有或即將發佈的贈品撰寫郵件。
我可以把檢查表傳給你們閱讀嗎?
可以,請把文字貼進需求說明,或提供含有該內容的公開頁面連結。內容會影響快速見效郵件的撰寫。
這些郵件應該多久寄一次?
前三封通常每天一封,之後每兩三天一封。您方案中的時程會依您的產品調整。
沒有找到您要的答案?


