成果範例
Text rewrite: "About us" page of a family bakery for new customers
Before (excerpt)
It all began many, many years ago, back in 1987, when our grandmother Rosa, who had always loved baking ever since she was a little girl growing up in the countryside, decided, after a lot of thinking and with the support of the whole family, to open a small bakery on Mill Lane. In those days there were not so many bakeries around and people really appreciated having fresh bread. Over the years, we have grown a lot and nowadays we bake more than 40 kinds of bread and pastries every day, and we also try our best to use local ingredients whenever it is possible to do so.
After (excerpt)
Baking on Mill Lane since 1987
Rosa opened our first bakery on Mill Lane in 1987 with one oven and three recipes from her village. Today her grandchildren run two shops and bake more than 40 kinds of bread and pastries every morning.
We still work the way she did: long, slow fermentation, flour from a mill 30 miles away and butter from a local dairy. As Rosa put it, "Good bread needs time, not tricks."
For cafés and restaurants
Since 2024 we also bake for cafés. Order by 2 pm and your bread arrives before 7 am the next day, six days a week.
Summary of changes
| What | Before | After |
|---|---|---|
| Length | 1,380 words | 790 words (−43%) |
| Structure | One long story in 11 paragraphs | 4 sections: our story, how we bake, for cafés, visit us |
| Audience | Neighbours who know the family | New customers and café owners |
| Sentences | Average 31 words | Average 14 words |
What was changed:
- Repeated ideas cut (the "love of baking" appeared 5 times; now once, through what Rosa did)
- Vague phrases like "try our best to use local ingredients" replaced with the concrete facts you gave us elsewhere on the page (the mill, the dairy)
- A new section for cafés built only from the wholesale details in your brief (order time, delivery time, days)
- Headings added so a café owner can find "For cafés" without reading the whole story
What stayed exactly the same: the year 1987, Mill Lane, "more than 40 kinds", the 30-mile distance to the mill and Rosa's quote, word for word.
Client: Larkfield Bakery, a family bakery with two shops and a new wholesale line for cafés Input: the "About us" page, 1,380 words, written 10 years ago for neighbours who already knew the family Brief: rewrite for café owners and new customers; keep it warm but shorter and more concrete; keep all dates, numbers and the grandmother's quote unchanged
客戶與所有細節皆為虛構。
關於此服務
您知道自己想說什麼，也已經用條列、片段或語音筆記的逐字稿記下來；我們把它轉成一篇完整、連貫的文字。每個重點變成一個段落並加上過渡，順序經過安排讓論述層層推進，除了銜接用語與淺白的說明之外，我們不會加入任何您沒說過的內容。適用於部落格文章、電子報、報告、演講、信件與網站頁面。
包含內容
- 您將獲得依據您的筆記寫成的完整文字，附標題與小標，並附一份需要您補充事實、數字或例子的重點簡短清單。以訂單頁面的文字及 Word（.docx）檔提供。
- 只用您的想法不捏造事實或論述
- 層層推進的順序重點經過安排，讓文字流暢
- 過渡段落串連成一個故事
- 標示缺口需要您補充事實之處
服務流程
- 1筆記您提供筆記與用途
- 2撰寫我們把它們擴寫成完整段落
- 3缺口您補上標示的重點
需要您提供的資料
貼上或以 Word、PDF 檔提供的筆記、條列或逐字稿、文字的用途與讀者、您需要的長度，以及一段您喜歡的語氣範例。
我們會詢問您：
- 這份文字的用途是什麼？
- 誰會閱讀或聽到它？
- 最終文字應該多長？
- 有您喜歡其語氣的文字嗎？
比較方案
付款保障
下單時付款，但只有在驗收成果後，款項才會撥付。
- 固定價格付款後，方案價格不會變動。
- 款項先行保留付款時，金額只會先保留，在您驗收後才會撥付給服務。
- 交付前檢查每份成果在交到您手上之前都會經過品質檢查，您也可以在驗收前於訂單頁面查看成果。
- 免費修改在需求說明範圍內，可依方案允許的次數提出修改。
- 3 天後自動驗收若您在交付後 3 天內未驗收也未提出修改，成果將自動驗收。若您在交付後於訂單聊天室留言，訂單會暫停自動驗收；我們回覆後，可能會重新起算 3 天，並會在聊天室中告知。
- 重新製作或全額退款若成果不符合您的需求說明且修改後仍未改善，或製作時間超過交付期限的兩倍，請在訂單聊天室留言：我們將重新製作，或全額退還款項。
常見問題
我的筆記很粗略，可以嗎？
可以。片段、箭頭與不完整的句子都沒問題，只要重點在就行。如果有不清楚的地方，我們會就地標示，而不是猜測。
我可以寄語音筆記嗎？
本服務依據文字作業。請貼上逐字稿，或先訂購聽打服務，再把結果寄給我們。
你們會加入研究或統計資料嗎？
不會，我們不會加入外部事實。在數字或例子有幫助的地方，我們會標出位置讓您補充。
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