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標準版方案範例
Text rewrite: "About us" page of a family bakery for new customers
Before (excerpt)
It all began many, many years ago, back in 1987, when our grandmother Rosa, who had always loved baking ever since she was a little girl growing up in the countryside, decided, after a lot of thinking and with the support of the whole family, to open a small bakery on Mill Lane. In those days there were not so many bakeries around and people really appreciated having fresh bread. Over the years, we have grown a lot and nowadays we bake more than 40 kinds of bread and pastries every day, and we also try our best to use local ingredients whenever it is possible to do so.
After (excerpt)
Baking on Mill Lane since 1987
Rosa opened our first bakery on Mill Lane in 1987 with one oven and three recipes from her village. Today her grandchildren run two shops and bake more than 40 kinds of bread and pastries every morning.
We still work the way she did: long, slow fermentation, flour from a mill 30 miles away and butter from a local dairy. As Rosa put it, "Good bread needs time, not tricks."
For cafés and restaurants
Since 2024 we also bake for cafés. Order by 2 pm and your bread arrives before 7 am the next day, six days a week.
Summary of changes
| What | Before | After |
|---|---|---|
| Length | 1,380 words | 790 words (−43%) |
| Structure | One long story in 11 paragraphs | 4 sections: our story, how we bake, for cafés, visit us |
| Audience | Neighbours who know the family | New customers and café owners |
| Sentences | Average 31 words | Average 14 words |
What was changed:
- Repeated ideas cut (the "love of baking" appeared 5 times; now once, through what Rosa did)
- Vague phrases like "try our best to use local ingredients" replaced with the concrete facts you gave us elsewhere on the page (the mill, the dairy)
- A new section for cafés built only from the wholesale details in your brief (order time, delivery time, days)
- Headings added so a café owner can find "For cafés" without reading the whole story
What stayed exactly the same: the year 1987, Mill Lane, "more than 40 kinds", the 30-mile distance to the mill and Rosa's quote, word for word.
Client: Larkfield Bakery, a family bakery with two shops and a new wholesale line for cafés Input: the "About us" page, 1,380 words, written 10 years ago for neighbours who already knew the family Brief: rewrite for café owners and new customers; keep it warm but shorter and more concrete; keep all dates, numbers and the grandmother's quote unchanged
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關於此服務
我們把法律、技術、醫療、財務或學術文字改寫成一般讀者讀一遍就懂的白話。長句變短句，術語替換或加以說明，最重要的資訊移到最前面。意思維持不變：我們絕不會為了讓文字更簡單而刪去條件、數字或警語。
包含內容
- 您會收到白話版本、必須保留的術語表，以及修改摘要，包括原文有歧義之處。
- 簡短清楚的句子一句只講一個重點
- 術語替換或加以說明盡可能使用日常用語
- 重點資訊優先讀者必須知道或必須做的事
- 不遺漏重要內容保留條件、數字與警語
- 術語表必須保留的術語並附說明
服務流程
- 1需求說明您提供文字並說明讀者是誰
- 2改寫我們簡化文字，並確認沒有遺漏
- 3交付您收到白話版與術語表
需要您提供的資料
原文、讀者是誰、讀者看完後需要做什麼，以及出於法律原因必須保持精確的措辭。
我們會詢問您：
- 讀者是誰？
- 讀者看完後應該能做到什麼？
- 哪些措辭必須完全保持原樣？
- 有沒有想要達到的閱讀程度？
比較方案
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- 免費修改在需求說明範圍內，可依方案允許的次數提出修改。
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- 重新製作或全額退款若成果不符合您的需求說明且修改後仍未改善，或製作時間超過交付期限的兩倍，請在訂單聊天室留言：我們將重新製作，或全額退還款項。
常見問題
白話版具有同等的法律效力嗎？
不一定。請用它來說明原文，並在律師沒有另行核可的情況下，以原文作為具約束力的文本。
你們會提供法律或醫療建議嗎？
不會。我們只讓文字更容易閱讀，不改變它所表達的內容。
我可以要求修改嗎？
可以，在您所選方案的修改次數內皆可。
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