寫作自然改寫
把生硬草稿改寫成自然易讀的文字
價格起 US$12
成果範例
標準版方案範例
Text rewrite: "About us" page of a family bakery for new customers
Before (excerpt)
It all began many, many years ago, back in 1987, when our grandmother Rosa, who had always loved baking ever since she was a little girl growing up in the countryside, decided, after a lot of thinking and with the support of the whole family, to open a small bakery on Mill Lane. In those days there were not so many bakeries around and people really appreciated having fresh bread. Over the years, we have grown a lot and nowadays we bake more than 40 kinds of bread and pastries every day, and we also try our best to use local ingredients whenever it is possible to do so.
After (excerpt)
Baking on Mill Lane since 1987
Rosa opened our first bakery on Mill Lane in 1987 with one oven and three recipes from her village. Today her grandchildren run two shops and bake more than 40 kinds of bread and pastries every morning.
We still work the way she did: long, slow fermentation, flour from a mill 30 miles away and butter from a local dairy. As Rosa put it, "Good bread needs time, not tricks."
For cafés and restaurants
Since 2024 we also bake for cafés. Order by 2 pm and your bread arrives before 7 am the next day, six days a week.
Summary of changes
| What | Before | After |
|---|---|---|
| Length | 1,380 words | 790 words (−43%) |
| Structure | One long story in 11 paragraphs | 4 sections: our story, how we bake, for cafés, visit us |
| Audience | Neighbours who know the family | New customers and café owners |
| Sentences | Average 31 words | Average 14 words |
What was changed:
- Repeated ideas cut (the "love of baking" appeared 5 times; now once, through what Rosa did)
- Vague phrases like "try our best to use local ingredients" replaced with the concrete facts you gave us elsewhere on the page (the mill, the dairy)
- A new section for cafés built only from the wholesale details in your brief (order time, delivery time, days)
- Headings added so a café owner can find "For cafés" without reading the whole story
What stayed exactly the same: the year 1987, Mill Lane, "more than 40 kinds", the 30-mile distance to the mill and Rosa's quote, word for word.
Client: Larkfield Bakery, a family bakery with two shops and a new wholesale line for cafés Input: the "About us" page, 1,380 words, written 10 years ago for neighbours who already knew the family Brief: rewrite for café owners and new customers; keep it warm but shorter and more concrete; keep all dates, numbers and the grandmother's quote unchanged
客戶與所有細節皆為虛構。
關於此服務
我們會針對新的目標、語氣或讀者重新調整您的文字：精簡冗長段落、重整行文流程，並替換生硬的措辭。事實、數字與引文維持原樣，您標示為固定的內容也不會更動。您還會收到一份簡短的修改摘要。
包含內容
- 您會收到改寫後的文字與主要修改摘要。內容會顯示在訂單頁面，並提供 Word（.docx）檔案。
- 結構更清楚順序合理，標題與段落分明
- 新的語氣或讀者配合您指定的讀者調整
- 事實維持不變數字、名稱與引文不更動
- 必要時更精簡刪去重複與贅詞
- 修改摘要改了什麼、為什麼改
服務流程
- 1需求說明您提供文字與目標
- 2改寫我們調整結構、語氣與措辭
- 3交付您會收到新的文字與修改摘要
- 4修改可在方案的修改次數內提出調整
需要您提供的資料
原始文字（貼上，或提供照片或掃描檔）、新版本的用途、您想要的語氣，以及不可更動的內容。文件也可以用 PDF、Word 或 Excel 檔案附上。
我們會詢問您：
- 新版本要達成什麼目的？
- 哪些內容必須維持不變？
- 文字要變短、變長，還是差不多？
比較方案
付款保障
下單時付款，但只有在驗收成果後，款項才會撥付。
- 固定價格付款後，方案價格不會變動。
- 款項先行保留付款時，金額只會先保留，在您驗收後才會撥付給服務。
- 交付前檢查每份成果在交到您手上之前都會經過品質檢查，您也可以在驗收前於訂單頁面查看成果。
- 免費修改在需求說明範圍內，可依方案允許的次數提出修改。
- 3 天後自動驗收若您在交付後 3 天內未驗收也未提出修改，成果將自動驗收。若您在交付後於訂單聊天室留言，訂單會暫停自動驗收；我們回覆後，可能會重新起算 3 天，並會在聊天室中告知。
- 重新製作或全額退款若成果不符合您的需求說明且修改後仍未改善，或製作時間超過交付期限的兩倍，請在訂單聊天室留言：我們將重新製作，或全額退還款項。
常見問題
文字能通過原創度檢測工具嗎？
我們會提供真正重新撰寫的文字，但不進行原創度檢測，也不保證任何分數。
可以保留我的 SEO 關鍵字嗎？
可以，請在需求說明中列出，我們會保留在文字中。
可以要求修改嗎？
可以，在您方案的修改次數內皆可。
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