寫作白話改寫
把複雜或專業的文字改寫成白話
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成果範例
標準版方案範例
Text rewrite: "About us" page of a family bakery for new customers
Before (excerpt)
It all began many, many years ago, back in 1987, when our grandmother Rosa, who had always loved baking ever since she was a little girl growing up in the countryside, decided, after a lot of thinking and with the support of the whole family, to open a small bakery on Mill Lane. In those days there were not so many bakeries around and people really appreciated having fresh bread. Over the years, we have grown a lot and nowadays we bake more than 40 kinds of bread and pastries every day, and we also try our best to use local ingredients whenever it is possible to do so.
After (excerpt)
Baking on Mill Lane since 1987
Rosa opened our first bakery on Mill Lane in 1987 with one oven and three recipes from her village. Today her grandchildren run two shops and bake more than 40 kinds of bread and pastries every morning.
We still work the way she did: long, slow fermentation, flour from a mill 30 miles away and butter from a local dairy. As Rosa put it, "Good bread needs time, not tricks."
For cafés and restaurants
Since 2024 we also bake for cafés. Order by 2 pm and your bread arrives before 7 am the next day, six days a week.
Summary of changes
| What | Before | After |
|---|---|---|
| Length | 1,380 words | 790 words (−43%) |
| Structure | One long story in 11 paragraphs | 4 sections: our story, how we bake, for cafés, visit us |
| Audience | Neighbours who know the family | New customers and café owners |
| Sentences | Average 31 words | Average 14 words |
What was changed:
- Repeated ideas cut (the "love of baking" appeared 5 times; now once, through what Rosa did)
- Vague phrases like "try our best to use local ingredients" replaced with the concrete facts you gave us elsewhere on the page (the mill, the dairy)
- A new section for cafés built only from the wholesale details in your brief (order time, delivery time, days)
- Headings added so a café owner can find "For cafés" without reading the whole story
What stayed exactly the same: the year 1987, Mill Lane, "more than 40 kinds", the 30-mile distance to the mill and Rosa's quote, word for word.
Client: Larkfield Bakery, a family bakery with two shops and a new wholesale line for cafés Input: the "About us" page, 1,380 words, written 10 years ago for neighbours who already knew the family Brief: rewrite for café owners and new customers; keep it warm but shorter and more concrete; keep all dates, numbers and the grandmother's quote unchanged
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關於此服務
我們為流失讀者或流量的舊部落格文章進行更新：開門見山的新引言、更清楚的標題、更精簡的段落，以及更新後的標題與 meta 描述。我們會標出看起來過時的陳述，例如舊年份、價格、工具名稱或統計數據，並依您提供的資訊更新；沒有新資料之處則標註出來請您確認。您的關鍵字與內部連結都會保留。
包含內容
- 您會收到更新後的文章（附新標題與 meta 描述）、列出過時內容及其修改或待您確認事項的清單，以及修改摘要。
- 全新的引言與標題開門見山，方便快速瀏覽
- 標出過時內容年份、價格、工具與統計數據
- 保留關鍵字與連結不會白費您的 SEO 基礎
- 全新標題與 meta 描述為現今的搜尋結果而寫
- 修改摘要我們改了什麼，以及原因
服務流程
- 1需求說明您提供文章、關鍵字與最新資訊
- 2更新我們改寫文字並標出過時之處
- 3交付您收到更新後的文章與說明
需要您提供的資料
目前的文章內容或其連結、主要關鍵字、要加入的新資訊或數據，以及這篇文章現在要達成的目標。
我們會詢問您：
- 這篇文章要爭取哪些關鍵字的排名？
- 這篇文章寫成後有什麼改變？
- 文章要變長、變短，還是維持原樣？
- 哪些內部連結必須保留？
比較方案
付款保障
下單時付款，但只有在驗收成果後，款項才會撥付。
- 固定價格付款後，方案價格不會變動。
- 款項先行保留付款時，金額只會先保留，在您驗收後才會撥付給服務。
- 交付前檢查每份成果在交到您手上之前都會經過品質檢查，您也可以在驗收前於訂單頁面查看成果。
- 免費修改在需求說明範圍內，可依方案允許的次數提出修改。
- 3 天後自動驗收若您在交付後 3 天內未驗收也未提出修改，成果將自動驗收。若您在交付後於訂單聊天室留言，訂單會暫停自動驗收；我們回覆後，可能會重新起算 3 天，並會在聊天室中告知。
- 重新製作或全額退款若成果不符合您的需求說明且修改後仍未改善，或製作時間超過交付期限的兩倍，請在訂單聊天室留言：我們將重新製作，或全額退還款項。
常見問題
更新後的文章能重新拿回排名嗎？
更新通常有幫助，但我們無法保證排名，排名也取決於競爭對手與您整體網站的表現。
你們會自己查證新資訊嗎？
我們使用您提供的資訊，並標出需要查證之處，因此不會有未經證實的內容進入您的文章。
你們會幫我在網站上更新文章嗎？
不會，我們不會存取您的網站。您會收到文字，再自行貼上。
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