成果範例
Text rewrite: "About us" page of a family bakery for new customers
Before (excerpt)
It all began many, many years ago, back in 1987, when our grandmother Rosa, who had always loved baking ever since she was a little girl growing up in the countryside, decided, after a lot of thinking and with the support of the whole family, to open a small bakery on Mill Lane. In those days there were not so many bakeries around and people really appreciated having fresh bread. Over the years, we have grown a lot and nowadays we bake more than 40 kinds of bread and pastries every day, and we also try our best to use local ingredients whenever it is possible to do so.
After (excerpt)
Baking on Mill Lane since 1987
Rosa opened our first bakery on Mill Lane in 1987 with one oven and three recipes from her village. Today her grandchildren run two shops and bake more than 40 kinds of bread and pastries every morning.
We still work the way she did: long, slow fermentation, flour from a mill 30 miles away and butter from a local dairy. As Rosa put it, "Good bread needs time, not tricks."
For cafés and restaurants
Since 2024 we also bake for cafés. Order by 2 pm and your bread arrives before 7 am the next day, six days a week.
Summary of changes
| What | Before | After |
|---|---|---|
| Length | 1,380 words | 790 words (−43%) |
| Structure | One long story in 11 paragraphs | 4 sections: our story, how we bake, for cafés, visit us |
| Audience | Neighbours who know the family | New customers and café owners |
| Sentences | Average 31 words | Average 14 words |
What was changed:
- Repeated ideas cut (the "love of baking" appeared 5 times; now once, through what Rosa did)
- Vague phrases like "try our best to use local ingredients" replaced with the concrete facts you gave us elsewhere on the page (the mill, the dairy)
- A new section for cafés built only from the wholesale details in your brief (order time, delivery time, days)
- Headings added so a café owner can find "For cafés" without reading the whole story
What stayed exactly the same: the year 1987, Mill Lane, "more than 40 kinds", the 30-mile distance to the mill and Rosa's quote, word for word.
Client: Larkfield Bakery, a family bakery with two shops and a new wholesale line for cafés Input: the "About us" page, 1,380 words, written 10 years ago for neighbours who already knew the family Brief: rewrite for café owners and new customers; keep it warm but shorter and more concrete; keep all dates, numbers and the grandmother's quote unchanged
客戶與所有細節皆為虛構。
關於此服務
直接代發貨賣家與轉售商經常拿到與數百家商店相同的供應商描述，其中許多是堆砌關鍵字的笨拙翻譯。我們用您自己的話和您商店的口吻重寫每則描述，結構清楚，並使用易讀的英文或您商店所用的語言。每項規格、尺寸與材質都會對照來源核實並保持精確，供應商那些可疑的宣稱會被標示出來，而不是照樣重複。
包含內容
- 您會收到什麼每項商品提供：以您商店口吻改寫的標題、描述與規格清單，並註明任何需要查證的供應商宣稱。
- 全新的措辭用您自己的話重寫，而不是調換字詞
- 乾淨的語言修正破碎的翻譯與關鍵字堆砌
- 核對規格尺寸、材質與容量保持精確
- 商店口吻整份商品目錄語氣一致
- 標示可疑的宣稱標出供您向供應商確認
服務流程
- 1需求說明您貼上或附上供應商文字與語氣
- 2改寫我們改寫並交叉核對每項規格
- 3交付您會收到可用於商店的新文字
需要您提供的資料
貼在需求說明中的供應商描述或其螢幕截圖、您商店的語氣、語言，以及（如果有的話）商店連結。文件也可以用 PDF、Word 或 Excel 檔案附上。
我們會詢問您：
- 您的商店在哪裡？
- 您的商店聽起來應該是什麼樣子？
- 新文字要用哪種語言？
- 有您知道是錯誤的供應商宣稱嗎？
比較方案
付款保障
下單時付款，但只有在驗收成果後，款項才會撥付。
- 固定價格付款後，方案價格不會變動。
- 款項先行保留付款時，金額只會先保留，在您驗收後才會撥付給服務。
- 交付前檢查每份成果在交到您手上之前都會經過品質檢查，您也可以在驗收前於訂單頁面查看成果。
- 免費修改在需求說明範圍內，可依方案允許的次數提出修改。
- 3 天後自動驗收若您在交付後 3 天內未驗收也未提出修改，成果將自動驗收。若您在交付後於訂單聊天室留言，訂單會暫停自動驗收；我們回覆後，可能會重新起算 3 天，並會在聊天室中告知。
- 重新製作或全額退款若成果不符合您的需求說明且修改後仍未改善，或製作時間超過交付期限的兩倍，請在訂單聊天室留言：我們將重新製作，或全額退還款項。
常見問題
這些文字能通過重複內容檢查嗎？
我們撰寫的是真正全新的文字，但不執行原創性檢查，也不承諾任何分數。
你們會加入供應商沒提到的功能嗎？
不會。我們只使用來源中有的內容，或您在需求說明中補充的資訊。
供應商的文字可以是中文嗎？
可以。我們會以您商店的語言撰寫新的描述，並保持規格精確。
我可以要求修改嗎？
可以，在您方案的修改次數範圍內。
沒有找到您要的答案？