成果範例
Text rewrite: "About us" page of a family bakery for new customers
Before (excerpt)
It all began many, many years ago, back in 1987, when our grandmother Rosa, who had always loved baking ever since she was a little girl growing up in the countryside, decided, after a lot of thinking and with the support of the whole family, to open a small bakery on Mill Lane. In those days there were not so many bakeries around and people really appreciated having fresh bread. Over the years, we have grown a lot and nowadays we bake more than 40 kinds of bread and pastries every day, and we also try our best to use local ingredients whenever it is possible to do so.
After (excerpt)
Baking on Mill Lane since 1987
Rosa opened our first bakery on Mill Lane in 1987 with one oven and three recipes from her village. Today her grandchildren run two shops and bake more than 40 kinds of bread and pastries every morning.
We still work the way she did: long, slow fermentation, flour from a mill 30 miles away and butter from a local dairy. As Rosa put it, "Good bread needs time, not tricks."
For cafés and restaurants
Since 2024 we also bake for cafés. Order by 2 pm and your bread arrives before 7 am the next day, six days a week.
Summary of changes
| What | Before | After |
|---|---|---|
| Length | 1,380 words | 790 words (−43%) |
| Structure | One long story in 11 paragraphs | 4 sections: our story, how we bake, for cafés, visit us |
| Audience | Neighbours who know the family | New customers and café owners |
| Sentences | Average 31 words | Average 14 words |
What was changed:
- Repeated ideas cut (the "love of baking" appeared 5 times; now once, through what Rosa did)
- Vague phrases like "try our best to use local ingredients" replaced with the concrete facts you gave us elsewhere on the page (the mill, the dairy)
- A new section for cafés built only from the wholesale details in your brief (order time, delivery time, days)
- Headings added so a café owner can find "For cafés" without reading the whole story
What stayed exactly the same: the year 1987, Mill Lane, "more than 40 kinds", the 30-mile distance to the mill and Rosa's quote, word for word.
Client: Larkfield Bakery, a family bakery with two shops and a new wholesale line for cafés Input: the "About us" page, 1,380 words, written 10 years ago for neighbours who already knew the family Brief: rewrite for café owners and new customers; keep it warm but shorter and more concrete; keep all dates, numbers and the grandmother's quote unchanged
客戶與所有細節皆為虛構。
關於此服務
我們為年紀較小或經驗較少的讀者改寫文字：特定年齡的兒童、各年級的學生，或 A2、B1 等級的語言學習者。句子變短，艱深的字詞被替換或順帶解釋，抽象的概念被轉化成該年齡讀者熟悉的例子。事實、名稱與數字保持準確，所以簡化版仍忠於原文。
包含內容
- 您會收到什麼改寫成目標程度的文字、被替換或解釋的字詞簡短清單，以及主要更動的摘要。
- 符合程度的句子長度與結構適合讀者的年齡
- 更簡單的詞彙艱深的字詞被替換或解釋
- 熟悉的例子把概念與讀者的世界連結
- 事實保持準確簡化但絕不寫錯
- 字詞清單哪些字被替換，供老師與編輯參考
服務流程
- 1需求說明您貼上或附上文字，並說明讀者的程度
- 2改寫我們在保留事實的前提下簡化
- 3交付您會收到文字與字詞清單
需要您提供的資料
貼在需求說明中的原文或其照片、目標年齡、年級或語言程度，以及文字的使用地點。文件也可以用 PDF、Word 或 Excel 檔案附上。
我們會詢問您：
- 誰會閱讀新版本？
- 會用在哪裡？
- 哪些詞彙即使艱深也必須保留？
- 文字應該比原文更短嗎？
比較方案
付款保障
下單時付款，但只有在驗收成果後，款項才會撥付。
- 固定價格付款後，方案價格不會變動。
- 款項先行保留付款時，金額只會先保留，在您驗收後才會撥付給服務。
- 交付前檢查每份成果在交到您手上之前都會經過品質檢查，您也可以在驗收前於訂單頁面查看成果。
- 免費修改在需求說明範圍內，可依方案允許的次數提出修改。
- 3 天後自動驗收若您在交付後 3 天內未驗收也未提出修改，成果將自動驗收。若您在交付後於訂單聊天室留言，訂單會暫停自動驗收；我們回覆後，可能會重新起算 3 天，並會在聊天室中告知。
- 重新製作或全額退款若成果不符合您的需求說明且修改後仍未改善，或製作時間超過交付期限的兩倍，請在訂單聊天室留言：我們將重新製作，或全額退還款項。
常見問題
可以達到特定的可讀性分數嗎？
我們會朝您指定的年級或程度努力，並能告訴您成果的大致年級。我們不承諾確切的分數。
可以把科學文章簡化給兒童看嗎？
可以。我們保持科學內容正確，並用日常的例子來說明。
可以用其他語言撰寫嗎？
可以，改寫會以您文字所用的語言進行。
我可以要求修改嗎？
可以，在您方案的修改次數範圍內。
沒有找到您要的答案？