寫作
成果範例
Email sequence: 3-email welcome series for a sourdough baking course
Sending plan
| When | Job | |
|---|---|---|
| 1 | Right after sign-up | Deliver the guide, set expectations |
| 2 | Day 3 | Solve the most common starter problem, build trust |
| 3 | Day 6 | Offer the course with a 48-hour welcome price |
Email 1: Your starter guide is here
Subject A: Your 7-day starter guide (and one tip before you begin) Subject B: {first_name}, day 1 starts with flour and water Preview: The one thing most beginners get wrong on day one.
Hi {first_name},
Here is your guide: Starter in 7 days. Print it or keep it on your phone next to the jar.
One tip before you begin: use a jar with straight sides and put a rubber band at the level of the starter after each feeding. In a few hours you will see exactly how much it rose, with no guessing.
Over the next week I will send you two short emails: one to fix the problem almost everyone hits on day 3, and one about baking your first loaf.
[Button] Download the guide
Happy feeding, Maya, Rise & Crumb
Email 2: Why your starter went quiet on day 3
Subject A: Day 3 and nothing is happening? Good. Subject B: The day-3 slump, explained in 2 minutes Preview: It is not dead. Here is what is going on.
Hi {first_name},
If your starter bubbled like mad on day 2 and then went flat, you are not doing anything wrong. The first bacteria to wake up are not the ones that make bread rise; they fade, and the yeast takes over around day 4 or 5.
What to do:
- Keep feeding at the same time each day.
- Move the jar somewhere around 24–26 °C (the top of the fridge works).
- Swap 20% of the flour for whole wheat to give it more to eat.
[Button] Watch the 3-minute feeding demo
Email 3: Your first loaf, with a welcome price
Subject A: Ready to bake? Your welcome price ends Thursday Subject B: From a jar of starter to a crusty loaf Preview: 12 lessons, $69 for the next 48 hours.
Hi {first_name},
Your starter should be lively by now. The next step is the part the guide cannot show you: shaping, scoring and the bake itself.
The full course has 12 video lessons, a printable baking schedule and a troubleshooting section for flat, dense or sour loaves. For the next 48 hours it is $69 instead of $89.
[Button] Join the course for $69
Personalization fields: {first_name}, {signup_date}, {offer_deadline}.
Client: Rise & Crumb, an online sourdough course for home bakers ($89, lifetime access) Audience: people who downloaded the free "Starter in 7 days" guide Goal: turn new subscribers into course buyers within 6 days
客戶與所有細節皆為虛構。
關於此服務
健身房、俱樂部、協會與付費社群的會員,常常並不是決定離開,而是錯過了續約日期而中斷。我們撰寫圍繞到期日安排的續約系列郵件:提前提醒他們這一年獲得了什麼、載明日期與價格的通知、最後一天的訊息,以及會員資格中斷後附上回歸管道的友善通知。每封郵件都有一個續約按鈕與一個留下的理由,例如會員活動或他們尚未使用的福利。
包含內容
- 您會收到什麼每封附 2 個主旨與一行預覽文字的續約提醒郵件,並在寄送計畫中依到期日安排時程。內容以文字形式提供在訂單頁面,可貼到您的會員或電子郵件平台。
- 配合到期日到期前、當天與到期後
- 年度回顧會員從中獲得了什麼
- 價格與日期清楚結帳時沒有意外
- 一個續約按鈕每封郵件都是同一個動作
- 中斷會員通知友善的回歸管道
服務流程
- 1需求說明您分享福利、價格與日期
- 2系列郵件我們依到期日規劃時程
- 3郵件我們撰寫每封提醒
需要您提供的資料
您的組織與會員類型、續約價格與日期的計算方式、主要福利、即將舉行的活動或優惠,以及會員資格中斷時會發生什麼。
我們會詢問您:
- 是哪一種會員制度?
- 會自動續約,還是會員必須手動續約?
- 續約價格是多少?有早鳥優惠嗎?
- 郵件應強調哪些福利或活動?
比較方案
付款保障
下單時付款,但只有在驗收成果後,款項才會撥付。
- 固定價格付款後,方案價格不會變動。
- 款項先行保留付款時,金額只會先保留,在您驗收後才會撥付給服務。
- 交付前檢查每份成果在交到您手上之前都會經過品質檢查,您也可以在驗收前於訂單頁面查看成果。
- 免費修改在需求說明範圍內,可依方案允許的次數提出修改。
- 3 天後自動驗收若您在交付後 3 天內未驗收也未提出修改,成果將自動驗收。若您在交付後於訂單聊天室留言,訂單會暫停自動驗收;我們回覆後,可能會重新起算 3 天,並會在聊天室中告知。
- 重新製作或全額退款若成果不符合您的需求說明且修改後仍未改善,或製作時間超過交付期限的兩倍,請在訂單聊天室留言:我們將重新製作,或全額退還款項。
常見問題
這些郵件適用於自動續約的會員嗎?
適用,此時我們會撰寫即將扣款的清楚通知(許多國家都有此要求),而不是「請續約」的訊息。
你們會在我的平台設定時程嗎?
不會,我們提供寄送計畫。您在會員或電子郵件工具中設定觸發條件。
也可以撰寫簡訊提醒嗎?
可以,請在需求說明中提出,我們會加上最後一天提醒的簡短簡訊版本。
沒有找到您要的答案?


