寫作
成果範例
Text rewrite: "About us" page of a family bakery for new customers
Before (excerpt)
It all began many, many years ago, back in 1987, when our grandmother Rosa, who had always loved baking ever since she was a little girl growing up in the countryside, decided, after a lot of thinking and with the support of the whole family, to open a small bakery on Mill Lane. In those days there were not so many bakeries around and people really appreciated having fresh bread. Over the years, we have grown a lot and nowadays we bake more than 40 kinds of bread and pastries every day, and we also try our best to use local ingredients whenever it is possible to do so.
After (excerpt)
Baking on Mill Lane since 1987
Rosa opened our first bakery on Mill Lane in 1987 with one oven and three recipes from her village. Today her grandchildren run two shops and bake more than 40 kinds of bread and pastries every morning.
We still work the way she did: long, slow fermentation, flour from a mill 30 miles away and butter from a local dairy. As Rosa put it, "Good bread needs time, not tricks."
For cafés and restaurants
Since 2024 we also bake for cafés. Order by 2 pm and your bread arrives before 7 am the next day, six days a week.
Summary of changes
| What | Before | After |
|---|---|---|
| Length | 1,380 words | 790 words (−43%) |
| Structure | One long story in 11 paragraphs | 4 sections: our story, how we bake, for cafés, visit us |
| Audience | Neighbours who know the family | New customers and café owners |
| Sentences | Average 31 words | Average 14 words |
What was changed:
- Repeated ideas cut (the "love of baking" appeared 5 times; now once, through what Rosa did)
- Vague phrases like "try our best to use local ingredients" replaced with the concrete facts you gave us elsewhere on the page (the mill, the dairy)
- A new section for cafés built only from the wholesale details in your brief (order time, delivery time, days)
- Headings added so a café owner can find "For cafés" without reading the whole story
What stayed exactly the same: the year 1987, Mill Lane, "more than 40 kinds", the 30-mile distance to the mill and Rosa's quote, word for word.
Client: Larkfield Bakery, a family bakery with two shops and a new wholesale line for cafés Input: the "About us" page, 1,380 words, written 10 years ago for neighbours who already knew the family Brief: rewrite for café owners and new customers; keep it warm but shorter and more concrete; keep all dates, numbers and the grandmother's quote unchanged
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包含內容
- 您將獲得更新後的手冊或政策文字,未變動的章節維持原樣,另附依章節整理的變更紀錄,較高方案另附給您的律師或人資的待釐清問題清單。以訂單頁面的文字及 Word(.docx)檔提供。
- 只改有變動的部分未動到的章節逐字保留
- 保留編號章節與交叉引用維持一致
- 標示矛盾之處新舊規則衝突的地方
- 變更紀錄逐章節整理,方便分享
服務流程
- 1上傳您上傳文件與變更內容
- 2更新我們改寫受影響的章節
- 3審閱您的律師或人資檢查結果
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我們會詢問您:
- 這是哪一類文件?對象是誰?
- 改了什麼?
- 新規則從哪一天開始適用?
- 這份文件適用於哪個國家或地區?
比較方案
付款保障
下單時付款,但只有在驗收成果後,款項才會撥付。
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- 免費修改在需求說明範圍內,可依方案允許的次數提出修改。
- 3 天後自動驗收若您在交付後 3 天內未驗收也未提出修改,成果將自動驗收。若您在交付後於訂單聊天室留言,訂單會暫停自動驗收;我們回覆後,可能會重新起算 3 天,並會在聊天室中告知。
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常見問題
你們已經知道新法規了嗎?
我們依據您提供的規則作業。我們不研究法規,所以最終文字應由您的律師或人資檢查。
我能看到標示出來的變更嗎?
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我的手冊有 80 頁,你們接得了嗎?
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