成果範例
Text rewrite: "About us" page of a family bakery for new customers
Before (excerpt)
It all began many, many years ago, back in 1987, when our grandmother Rosa, who had always loved baking ever since she was a little girl growing up in the countryside, decided, after a lot of thinking and with the support of the whole family, to open a small bakery on Mill Lane. In those days there were not so many bakeries around and people really appreciated having fresh bread. Over the years, we have grown a lot and nowadays we bake more than 40 kinds of bread and pastries every day, and we also try our best to use local ingredients whenever it is possible to do so.
After (excerpt)
Baking on Mill Lane since 1987
Rosa opened our first bakery on Mill Lane in 1987 with one oven and three recipes from her village. Today her grandchildren run two shops and bake more than 40 kinds of bread and pastries every morning.
We still work the way she did: long, slow fermentation, flour from a mill 30 miles away and butter from a local dairy. As Rosa put it, "Good bread needs time, not tricks."
For cafés and restaurants
Since 2024 we also bake for cafés. Order by 2 pm and your bread arrives before 7 am the next day, six days a week.
Summary of changes
| What | Before | After |
|---|---|---|
| Length | 1,380 words | 790 words (−43%) |
| Structure | One long story in 11 paragraphs | 4 sections: our story, how we bake, for cafés, visit us |
| Audience | Neighbours who know the family | New customers and café owners |
| Sentences | Average 31 words | Average 14 words |
What was changed:
- Repeated ideas cut (the "love of baking" appeared 5 times; now once, through what Rosa did)
- Vague phrases like "try our best to use local ingredients" replaced with the concrete facts you gave us elsewhere on the page (the mill, the dairy)
- A new section for cafés built only from the wholesale details in your brief (order time, delivery time, days)
- Headings added so a café owner can find "For cafés" without reading the whole story
What stayed exactly the same: the year 1987, Mill Lane, "more than 40 kinds", the 30-mile distance to the mill and Rosa's quote, word for word.
Client: Larkfield Bakery, a family bakery with two shops and a new wholesale line for cafés Input: the "About us" page, 1,380 words, written 10 years ago for neighbours who already knew the family Brief: rewrite for café owners and new customers; keep it warm but shorter and more concrete; keep all dates, numbers and the grandmother's quote unchanged
客戶與所有細節皆為虛構。
關於此服務
為眼睛寫的文字會讓聲音絆倒：句中夾著子句的長句、括號、縮寫、像 1,250.75 這樣的數字，以及只在紙面上有效的清單。我們把它改寫成適合口說的版本，使用較短的句子、將數字與縮寫寫成實際唸出來的樣子、加入告訴聽眾進度的路標詞，並在適當的位置安排換氣點。適用於演講、播客腳本、影片旁白、有聲書片段與公告。
包含內容
- 您將獲得一份為耳朵而寫的文字版本，數字與縮寫以文字寫出、附預估朗讀時間，較高方案另附停頓與重音標記以及人名的發音說明。以訂單頁面的文字及 Word（.docx）檔提供。
- 口語句子簡短，重點放在句尾
- 數字依唸法書寫「大約一千兩百五十」
- 路標詞首先、接著、最後、簡單來說
- 計時以自然速度估算的分鐘數
服務流程
- 1文字您提供文字與使用場合
- 2改寫我們改寫成適合口說的版本
- 3試讀您朗讀一遍，再提出微調需求
需要您提供的資料
書面文字（貼上或以 Word、PDF 檔提供）、朗讀的地點與朗讀者、若有目標長度請提供分鐘數，以及難以發音的名稱或術語。
我們會詢問您：
- 文字會在哪裡朗讀？
- 誰會朗讀？
- 有時間限制嗎？
- 哪些名稱或術語難以發音？
比較方案
付款保障
下單時付款，但只有在驗收成果後，款項才會撥付。
- 固定價格付款後，方案價格不會變動。
- 款項先行保留付款時，金額只會先保留，在您驗收後才會撥付給服務。
- 交付前檢查每份成果在交到您手上之前都會經過品質檢查，您也可以在驗收前於訂單頁面查看成果。
- 免費修改在需求說明範圍內，可依方案允許的次數提出修改。
- 3 天後自動驗收若您在交付後 3 天內未驗收也未提出修改，成果將自動驗收。若您在交付後於訂單聊天室留言，訂單會暫停自動驗收；我們回覆後，可能會重新起算 3 天，並會在聊天室中告知。
- 重新製作或全額退款若成果不符合您的需求說明且修改後仍未改善，或製作時間超過交付期限的兩倍，請在訂單聊天室留言：我們將重新製作，或全額退還款項。
常見問題
文字的長度會維持不變嗎？
通常會稍微變長，因為數字要寫成文字、也會加入路標詞。如果您有時間限制，我們會刪減以符合。
我可以用在文字轉語音嗎？
可以。以文字寫出的數字與清楚的標點，對合成語音也有幫助。如果您發布這類音訊，請告知聽眾這是合成語音。
你們如何標示停頓與重音？
用簡單的符號，例如 / 表示短停頓、// 表示長停頓，以及用大寫字母或重音符號標示重讀音節，並在開頭加以說明。
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