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成果範例
標準版方案範例
Text rewrite: "About us" page of a family bakery for new customers
Before (excerpt)
It all began many, many years ago, back in 1987, when our grandmother Rosa, who had always loved baking ever since she was a little girl growing up in the countryside, decided, after a lot of thinking and with the support of the whole family, to open a small bakery on Mill Lane. In those days there were not so many bakeries around and people really appreciated having fresh bread. Over the years, we have grown a lot and nowadays we bake more than 40 kinds of bread and pastries every day, and we also try our best to use local ingredients whenever it is possible to do so.
After (excerpt)
Baking on Mill Lane since 1987
Rosa opened our first bakery on Mill Lane in 1987 with one oven and three recipes from her village. Today her grandchildren run two shops and bake more than 40 kinds of bread and pastries every morning.
We still work the way she did: long, slow fermentation, flour from a mill 30 miles away and butter from a local dairy. As Rosa put it, "Good bread needs time, not tricks."
For cafés and restaurants
Since 2024 we also bake for cafés. Order by 2 pm and your bread arrives before 7 am the next day, six days a week.
Summary of changes
| What | Before | After |
|---|---|---|
| Length | 1,380 words | 790 words (−43%) |
| Structure | One long story in 11 paragraphs | 4 sections: our story, how we bake, for cafés, visit us |
| Audience | Neighbours who know the family | New customers and café owners |
| Sentences | Average 31 words | Average 14 words |
What was changed:
- Repeated ideas cut (the "love of baking" appeared 5 times; now once, through what Rosa did)
- Vague phrases like "try our best to use local ingredients" replaced with the concrete facts you gave us elsewhere on the page (the mill, the dairy)
- A new section for cafés built only from the wholesale details in your brief (order time, delivery time, days)
- Headings added so a café owner can find "For cafés" without reading the whole story
What stayed exactly the same: the year 1987, Mill Lane, "more than 40 kinds", the 30-mile distance to the mill and Rosa's quote, word for word.
Client: Larkfield Bakery, a family bakery with two shops and a new wholesale line for cafés Input: the "About us" page, 1,380 words, written 10 years ago for neighbours who already knew the family Brief: rewrite for café owners and new customers; keep it warm but shorter and more concrete; keep all dates, numbers and the grandmother's quote unchanged
客戶與所有細節皆為虛構。
關於此服務
我們用淺白的現代語言重述古舊文本：18、19 世紀的書信與日記、經典名著的舊譯本、教會或行會文件、早期技術手冊，或以如今已無人使用的文風寫成的家族文件。文意、名稱、日期與事件順序皆忠實保留，並對已經過時的字詞、單位與習俗加以解釋，而不是悄悄略過。您可以選擇貼近原文的現代版本，或是給年輕讀者與一般讀者的較自由改寫。
包含內容
- 您將獲得文本的現代語言版本，較高方案另附過時字詞、單位與習俗的詞彙表，進階版還提供逐段並列原文與現代版本的版面。以訂單頁面的文字及 Word（.docx）檔提供。
- 忠實的文意名稱、日期與事件不變
- 貼近或自由選擇現代語譯或重述
- 詞彙表舊字詞、單位、貨幣與習俗
- 並列對照逐段並列原文與現代文本
服務流程
- 1文字您提供舊文本與其背景
- 2現代版本我們用今日的語言重述
- 3註解我們解釋沒有現代對應的部分
需要您提供的資料
貼上或以 Word、含文字層的 PDF 檔提供的舊文本（手寫稿或掃描檔請提供打字轉錄稿）、大約年代與出處、新版本的讀者是誰，以及要貼近原文到什麼程度。
我們會詢問您：
- 文本是什麼？大約寫於什麼時候？
- 新版本的讀者是誰？
- 要貼近原文，還是自由閱讀的風格？
比較方案
付款保障
下單時付款，但只有在驗收成果後，款項才會撥付。
- 固定價格付款後，方案價格不會變動。
- 款項先行保留付款時，金額只會先保留，在您驗收後才會撥付給服務。
- 交付前檢查每份成果在交到您手上之前都會經過品質檢查，您也可以在驗收前於訂單頁面查看成果。
- 免費修改在需求說明範圍內，可依方案允許的次數提出修改。
- 3 天後自動驗收若您在交付後 3 天內未驗收也未提出修改，成果將自動驗收。若您在交付後於訂單聊天室留言，訂單會暫停自動驗收；我們回覆後，可能會重新起算 3 天，並會在聊天室中告知。
- 重新製作或全額退款若成果不符合您的需求說明且修改後仍未改善，或製作時間超過交付期限的兩倍，請在訂單聊天室留言：我們將重新製作，或全額退還款項。
常見問題
你們可以從照片判讀手寫字或舊式印刷體嗎？
舊式手寫字與黑體字通常無法穩定判讀，所以請提供打字轉錄稿。現代風格印刷體的清晰掃描檔通常可行。
我可以發表現代版本嗎？
這個版本供您使用，但原文的權利不是我們能授予的。非常古老的文本通常屬於公共領域；舊譯本是否仍受保護，請自行確認。
你們也從其他語言翻譯嗎？
本服務是將同一語言的文本現代化。若是其他語言的舊文本，請訂購翻譯，並在需求說明中註明年代。
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