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Text rewrite: "About us" page of a family bakery for new customers
Before (excerpt)
It all began many, many years ago, back in 1987, when our grandmother Rosa, who had always loved baking ever since she was a little girl growing up in the countryside, decided, after a lot of thinking and with the support of the whole family, to open a small bakery on Mill Lane. In those days there were not so many bakeries around and people really appreciated having fresh bread. Over the years, we have grown a lot and nowadays we bake more than 40 kinds of bread and pastries every day, and we also try our best to use local ingredients whenever it is possible to do so.
After (excerpt)
Baking on Mill Lane since 1987
Rosa opened our first bakery on Mill Lane in 1987 with one oven and three recipes from her village. Today her grandchildren run two shops and bake more than 40 kinds of bread and pastries every morning.
We still work the way she did: long, slow fermentation, flour from a mill 30 miles away and butter from a local dairy. As Rosa put it, "Good bread needs time, not tricks."
For cafés and restaurants
Since 2024 we also bake for cafés. Order by 2 pm and your bread arrives before 7 am the next day, six days a week.
Summary of changes
| What | Before | After |
|---|---|---|
| Length | 1,380 words | 790 words (−43%) |
| Structure | One long story in 11 paragraphs | 4 sections: our story, how we bake, for cafés, visit us |
| Audience | Neighbours who know the family | New customers and café owners |
| Sentences | Average 31 words | Average 14 words |
What was changed:
- Repeated ideas cut (the "love of baking" appeared 5 times; now once, through what Rosa did)
- Vague phrases like "try our best to use local ingredients" replaced with the concrete facts you gave us elsewhere on the page (the mill, the dairy)
- A new section for cafés built only from the wholesale details in your brief (order time, delivery time, days)
- Headings added so a café owner can find "For cafés" without reading the whole story
What stayed exactly the same: the year 1987, Mill Lane, "more than 40 kinds", the 30-mile distance to the mill and Rosa's quote, word for word.
Client: Larkfield Bakery, a family bakery with two shops and a new wholesale line for cafés Input: the "About us" page, 1,380 words, written 10 years ago for neighbours who already knew the family Brief: rewrite for café owners and new customers; keep it warm but shorter and more concrete; keep all dates, numbers and the grandmother's quote unchanged
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關於此服務
當一份文字有多個版本時，例如提案的兩份草稿、三位同事的筆記，或同一份指南的新舊版本，我們會把它們整合成一份乾淨的文字。重複的重點會合併，最好的措辭會保留，結構會重建，使其讀起來像一個整體，且不會遺漏任何版本中獨有的內容。如果各版本在事實、數字或決定上不一致，我們不會自行猜測：您會取得一份有待您解決的衝突清單。
包含內容
- 您將獲得一份整合並編輯後、結構統一的文字，另附每個部分取自哪份草稿的註記，以及供您決定的版本之間衝突清單。以訂單頁面的文字及 Word（.docx）檔提供。
- 不遺漏任何內容每個獨有的重點都納入
- 單一結構重建為一份連貫的文字
- 最佳措辭每個重點最清楚的版本
- 列出衝突互相矛盾的事實與數字
- 來源註記每個部分取自哪份草稿
服務流程
- 1草稿您上傳或貼上所有版本
- 2整合我們合併並編輯成一份文字
- 3決定您解決列出的衝突
需要您提供的資料
Word 檔、含文字層的 PDF 或貼上的文字形式的草稿（最多 3 個檔案，其餘請貼上）、哪個版本最新或最可信，以及最終文字的用途。
我們會詢問您：
- 哪個版本最新或最可靠？
- 最終文字的用途是什麼？
- 整合後的文字應該多長？
比較方案
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下單時付款，但只有在驗收成果後，款項才會撥付。
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- 免費修改在需求說明範圍內，可依方案允許的次數提出修改。
- 3 天後自動驗收若您在交付後 3 天內未驗收也未提出修改，成果將自動驗收。若您在交付後於訂單聊天室留言，訂單會暫停自動驗收；我們回覆後，可能會重新起算 3 天，並會在聊天室中告知。
- 重新製作或全額退款若成果不符合您的需求說明且修改後仍未改善，或製作時間超過交付期限的兩倍，請在訂單聊天室留言：我們將重新製作，或全額退還款項。
常見問題
如果兩份草稿的數字不同怎麼辦？
我們會把兩者與各自的出處都放入衝突清單，並在文字中留下標示的預留位置，直到您做出選擇。
我能看到哪些修改來自哪份草稿嗎？
可以，透過每個章節的來源註記。Word 檔本身不含追蹤修訂。
我可以上傳超過三個檔案嗎？
表單最多接受 3 個檔案；其餘草稿請以文字貼在需求說明中，總長度須在方案範圍內。
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