寫作
成果範例
Business letter: payment reminder to a wholesale client
Version A: polite but clear
Subject: Invoices HOC-0412 and HOC-0419: payment now 34 days overdue
Dear Ms. [Surname],
Thank you again for featuring our autumn mugs in your window display. We have heard from several of your customers who found us through your shop, and we value the partnership.
I am writing about two invoices that remain open:
| Invoice | Date | Amount | Due date |
|---|---|---|---|
| HOC-0412 | 2 September | $1,240.00 | 16 September |
| HOC-0419 | 9 September | $865.50 | 23 September |
| Total | $2,105.50 |
We have not yet received payment for either of them, and our reminder of 1 October went unanswered. If payment has already been sent, please accept our thanks and let me know the date so we can match it.
Could you please settle the total of $2,105.50 by [date, 7 days from sending]? Bank details are at the bottom of both invoices. If a split payment would be easier, reply to this email with a date for each part and we will gladly agree it.
We would like to plan your winter order together, and we can confirm the new collection as soon as the account is up to date.
Kind regards, [Your name] Hollow Oak Ceramics | [phone]
Version B: firm (changed paragraphs)
Subject: Final reminder: $2,105.50 overdue since September
Despite our reminder of 1 October, invoices HOC-0412 and HOC-0419 remain unpaid, now 34 days past their due dates.
Please pay the full $2,105.50 by [date]. Until the account is settled, we are unable to dispatch new orders, including the winter collection reserved for you.
If we do not receive payment or a reply by that date, we will apply the late fee set out in our terms of trade (section 5) and pass the matter to our collections partner.
Notes for you
- Use Version A first. If there is no reply within 7 days, send Version B.
- Fill in the bracketed fields and check that the invoice amounts match your records.
- Only mention the late fee if it really is in the terms the client signed.
Client: Hollow Oak Ceramics, a small pottery studio selling to gift shops Situation: a retail partner has not paid two invoices, now 34 days overdue. The studio wants the money, but also wants to keep the shop as a client. Delivered: one letter in two tones. Version A is below in full; Version B shows the paragraphs that change.
客戶與所有細節皆為虛構。
關於此服務
當出現新資訊時,助學金辦公室與入學審查委員會會重新考慮決定:失業、醫療費用、其他學校更好的條件,或他們沒看到的成績。我們撰寫能清楚、附數字呈現這些資訊,並要求具體審查的申訴信。語氣尊重而基於事實,絕不顯得理所當然。
包含內容
- 您會收到寄給助學金辦公室或入學單位的申訴信,包含您的新情況、數字與具體要求,另附應附文件清單。以文字及檔案形式交付。
- 新資訊優先辦公室尚未看到的內容
- 列出數字收入變動、費用或其他學校的金額
- 具體要求一個金額或重新審議
- 遵循學校規定長度、格式與期限
- 文件清單需附上的證明
服務流程
- 1您的決定您分享信件與變動內容
- 2申訴我們根據您的數字撰寫申訴
- 3提交您連同文件一起提交
需要您提供的資料
學校與您收到的決定、有什麼改變或他們不知道的事、涉及的數字、任何競爭的錄取條件,以及學校的申訴說明。
我們會詢問您:
- 這是助學金申訴還是入學申訴?
- 自您申請後有什麼改變?
- 您能分享哪些數字與文件?
- 學校對申訴有什麼要求?
比較方案
付款保障
下單時付款,但只有在驗收成果後,款項才會撥付。
- 固定價格付款後,方案價格不會變動。
- 款項先行保留付款時,金額只會先保留,在您驗收後才會撥付給服務。
- 交付前檢查每份成果在交到您手上之前都會經過品質檢查,您也可以在驗收前於訂單頁面查看成果。
- 免費修改在需求說明範圍內,可依方案允許的次數提出修改。
- 3 天後自動驗收若您在交付後 3 天內未驗收也未提出修改,成果將自動驗收。若您在交付後於訂單聊天室留言,訂單會暫停自動驗收;我們回覆後,可能會重新起算 3 天,並會在聊天室中告知。
- 重新製作或全額退款若成果不符合您的需求說明且修改後仍未改善,或製作時間超過交付期限的兩倍,請在訂單聊天室留言:我們將重新製作,或全額退還款項。
常見問題
學校會改變決定嗎?
我們無法保證。學校逐案決定;有真實數字、清楚的申訴能讓您的案件得到妥善審視。
我可以提到其他學校的錄取條件嗎?
可以,只要是真實的。許多助學金辦公室會要求提供競爭學校的獎助通知副本。
應該由我簽名,還是由我父母簽名?
通常由學生簽名,有時與家長共同簽名。請告訴我們學校偏好什麼,我們會以該口吻撰寫。
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