Payment protectionDetails
- Revisions within the package are free.
- If you do not respond within 3 days of delivery, the work is accepted automatically.
The money is reserved when you pay and released only once you accept the work.
Example result
Sales copy: ads and landing page for a weekend pottery workshop
Core message
You will leave with pieces you made yourself, even if you have never touched a wheel. The small group is the proof: there is time to help everyone.
Ad variants to test
| # | Headline | Text | Angle |
|---|---|---|---|
| A | Your first bowl, this weekend | Two days at the wheel, 6 people per group, 3 finished pieces to take home. No experience needed. | Outcome |
| B | Never touched clay? Perfect. | Our weekend workshop is built for complete beginners. Small group, all materials included. | Fear of being bad at it |
| C | A weekend away from screens | Two days, wet clay and a wheel. Leave with mugs and bowls you made yourself. | Escape |
Call to action on all three: See dates
Landing page
Make your first bowl this weekend
Two days at the pottery wheel in a group of six. You go home with at least three pieces you made yourself, glazed and fired.
[Button] Choose your weekend: $240
What happens over two days
- Saturday: centring clay, opening and pulling your first walls. Most people have a cylinder by lunch.
- Sunday: trimming yesterday's pieces, adding handles and choosing glazes.
- Two weeks later: your pieces are fired twice and ready to collect.
Why six people
With six students and one teacher, nobody waits long for help. When your clay goes off-centre, someone is there to show you why.
What is included
Clay, tools, apron, glazes, two firings, tea and snacks. You only need clothes that can get dirty.
Questions people ask
I'm not artistic. Will I manage? The wheel is a skill, not a talent; the first day is all technique. What if I can't make the dates? Transfer to another weekend free of charge up to 7 days before. Can I come with a friend? Yes. Book two places together and you will share a bench.
Next weekends fill quickly
Six places per group, three groups a month.
[Button] See dates and book
Objections handled
| Objection | Where it is answered |
|---|---|
| "I'll be bad at it" | Ad B, FAQ 1 |
| "$240 is a lot" | What is included, 3 pieces to keep |
| "My plans might change" | FAQ 2 |
Client: Kiln Corner, a small pottery studio running 2-day wheel-throwing workshops for beginners ($240, max 6 people) Buyer: adults aged 28–50 who want a hands-on hobby and have never touched clay Claims the client confirmed: groups of 6 maximum, all materials and two firings included, every student takes home at least 3 finished pieces
The client and all details are made up.
About this service
Many deals die quietly after the quote is sent: the client goes silent and the rep either never calls or calls with 'just checking in'. We write a follow-up call script that gives the call a reason: checking the client has read the quote and understood it, finding out how they are comparing options and who else is involved, answering price and scope questions, and agreeing a decision date or next meeting. Includes voicemail and short message versions for when nobody picks up.
What is included
- What you getA quote follow-up call script with opening reasons, questions, answers to common delays and objections, voicemail and message versions, as text on the order page.
- A real reason to callNever 'just checking in'
- Comparison questionsWho else, which criteria, which date
- Price and scope answersWithout dropping the price at once
- Stall responses'We're still thinking', 'the boss decides'
- Voicemail and messageShort versions when no one answers
How it works
- 1Your dealsYou describe quotes and why clients stall
- 2WritingWe write the call and message versions
- 3UseYour team calls with a clear purpose
What we need from you
What you quote for and typical amounts, how long clients usually take to decide, common reasons they stall, what usually wins or loses deals, and when your team normally calls after sending a quote.
We will ask you:
- What do you send quotes for, and for roughly how much?
- Why do clients usually go quiet after a quote?
- How many days after the quote does your team call?
- What concessions can reps offer, if any?
Compare packages
| Packages | BasicFollow-up call script$12 | StandardFollow-up sequence$25 | PremiumSequence with negotiation$45 |
|---|---|---|---|
| Deadline | 1 day | 3 days | 4 days |
| Revisions | 1 | 2 | 3 |
| Call stages | 1 | 3 | 3 |
| Stalls and objections | 5 | 8 | 12 |
| Voicemail and message versions | 1 | 3 | 5 |
| Order Basic | Order Standard | Order Premium |
Payment protection
You pay when you order, but the money is released only for accepted work.
- Fixed priceThe package price does not change after you pay.
- The money is reservedWhen you pay, the amount is only reserved. It is released to the service once you accept the work.
- Checked before deliveryEvery result goes through a quality check before it reaches you, and you see it on the order page before accepting it.
- Free revisionsAsk for changes within your brief as many times as the package allows.
- Acceptance after 3 daysIf within 3 days of delivery you neither accept the work nor ask for changes, it is accepted automatically. If you write in the order chat after delivery, the order waits; once we answer, we may start the 3 days again and will say so in the chat.
- Redo or a full refundIf the result does not match your brief and the revisions did not fix it, or the work takes more than twice its deadline, write in the order chat: we will redo the work or refund the payment in full.
Questions and answers
How soon should we call after sending a quote?
Usually within one to three working days, while it is fresh. We set timing for each call based on your sales cycle.
Should we offer a discount on the call?
Not first. The script finds the real blocker; if a concession is allowed, it is traded for a firm decision date.
Can it work by email too?
The message versions work for email or WhatsApp; for a full email follow-up sequence see the email offers.