Payment protectionDetails
- Revisions within the package are free.
- If you do not respond within 3 days of delivery, the work is accepted automatically.
The money is reserved when you pay and released only once you accept the work.
Example result
Sales copy: ads and landing page for a weekend pottery workshop
Core message
You will leave with pieces you made yourself, even if you have never touched a wheel. The small group is the proof: there is time to help everyone.
Ad variants to test
| # | Headline | Text | Angle |
|---|---|---|---|
| A | Your first bowl, this weekend | Two days at the wheel, 6 people per group, 3 finished pieces to take home. No experience needed. | Outcome |
| B | Never touched clay? Perfect. | Our weekend workshop is built for complete beginners. Small group, all materials included. | Fear of being bad at it |
| C | A weekend away from screens | Two days, wet clay and a wheel. Leave with mugs and bowls you made yourself. | Escape |
Call to action on all three: See dates
Landing page
Make your first bowl this weekend
Two days at the pottery wheel in a group of six. You go home with at least three pieces you made yourself, glazed and fired.
[Button] Choose your weekend: $240
What happens over two days
- Saturday: centring clay, opening and pulling your first walls. Most people have a cylinder by lunch.
- Sunday: trimming yesterday's pieces, adding handles and choosing glazes.
- Two weeks later: your pieces are fired twice and ready to collect.
Why six people
With six students and one teacher, nobody waits long for help. When your clay goes off-centre, someone is there to show you why.
What is included
Clay, tools, apron, glazes, two firings, tea and snacks. You only need clothes that can get dirty.
Questions people ask
I'm not artistic. Will I manage? The wheel is a skill, not a talent; the first day is all technique. What if I can't make the dates? Transfer to another weekend free of charge up to 7 days before. Can I come with a friend? Yes. Book two places together and you will share a bench.
Next weekends fill quickly
Six places per group, three groups a month.
[Button] See dates and book
Objections handled
| Objection | Where it is answered |
|---|---|
| "I'll be bad at it" | Ad B, FAQ 1 |
| "$240 is a lot" | What is included, 3 pieces to keep |
| "My plans might change" | FAQ 2 |
Client: Kiln Corner, a small pottery studio running 2-day wheel-throwing workshops for beginners ($240, max 6 people) Buyer: adults aged 28–50 who want a hands-on hobby and have never touched clay Claims the client confirmed: groups of 6 maximum, all materials and two firings included, every student takes home at least 3 finished pieces
The client and all details are made up.
About this service
Someone who calls you already wants something, and inbound calls are lost not to rejection but to slow answers, missing questions and no clear next step. We write an inbound script for your team: a greeting that sounds natural, three to five questions that find out what the caller needs and how soon, how to present the right option and price, how to handle 'I'm just comparing' and 'send me something by email', and how to close with a booking, order or follow-up date. Branches cover the most common call types you describe.
What is included
- What you getAn inbound call script with greeting, qualifying questions, offer presentation, answers to common replies and closing lines, with branches by call type, as text on the order page.
- Natural greetingName, company and an open question
- Need-finding questionsWhat, for whom, how soon, what budget
- Price questions handledRange first, then the right option
- Common replies'Just comparing', 'send an email', 'too expensive'
- Clear closeBooking, order or a dated follow-up
How it works
- 1Your callsYou describe why people call and what they ask
- 2WritingWe write the script with branches
- 3RolloutYour team practises and uses it
What we need from you
What you sell and typical prices, why people usually call, the questions they ask most, what a good call ends with (booking, order, visit), who answers the phone, and phrases your team must or must not use.
We will ask you:
- Why do people usually call you?
- What should a successful call end with?
- What do callers ask most often?
- Who answers the phone: sales staff, reception or the owner?
Compare packages
| Packages | BasicBasic inbound script$15 | StandardScript with branches$29 | PremiumFull inbound playbook$55 |
|---|---|---|---|
| Deadline | 1 day | 3 days | 4 days |
| Revisions | 1 | 2 | 3 |
| Call types | 1 | up to 3 | up to 5 |
| Replies handled | 5 | 10 | 15 |
| Short version for a desk card | No | Yes | Yes |
| Order Basic | Order Standard | Order Premium |
Payment protection
You pay when you order, but the money is released only for accepted work.
- Fixed priceThe package price does not change after you pay.
- The money is reservedWhen you pay, the amount is only reserved. It is released to the service once you accept the work.
- Checked before deliveryEvery result goes through a quality check before it reaches you, and you see it on the order page before accepting it.
- Free revisionsAsk for changes within your brief as many times as the package allows.
- Acceptance after 3 daysIf within 3 days of delivery you neither accept the work nor ask for changes, it is accepted automatically. If you write in the order chat after delivery, the order waits; once we answer, we may start the 3 days again and will say so in the chat.
- Redo or a full refundIf the result does not match your brief and the revisions did not fix it, or the work takes more than twice its deadline, write in the order chat: we will redo the work or refund the payment in full.
Questions and answers
How is this different from a cold calling script?
A cold call has to earn attention; an inbound caller already has a need. The script focuses on understanding it quickly and closing on a next step.
Will it sound memorised?
We write in spoken language with short lines and give alternatives, so staff can use their own words around the key questions.
Can it include our booking system steps?
Yes. Describe the steps in the brief and we add prompts at the right points of the call.