設計
成果範例
Brand platform and tone of voice: Hearth & Loaf bakery
Mission
We bake bread the slow way so our neighbours can have something honest on the table every day.
Values
- Patience. Every loaf ferments for 36 hours. We don't rush dough or people.
- Openness. You can see the ovens from the counter and ask us anything about ingredients.
- Neighbourliness. We know regulars by name and give unsold bread to the local food bank each evening.
- Craft over shine. A cracked crust matters more to us than perfect packaging.
Audience
Core: working parents and young professionals aged 28–45 who live within a 15-minute walk, care about what they eat and buy bread 3–4 times a week. Secondary: cafés and small restaurants looking for a reliable daily bread supplier.
Positioning
For locals who want real bread without a trip across town, Hearth & Loaf is the corner bakery that does slow fermentation every single day. Unlike supermarket "artisan" ranges, we bake on site and sell out by evening, so nothing on the shelf is older than this morning.
Tone of voice
Warm, plain-spoken, a little playful. We sound like the baker chatting over the counter, not like a menu in a fine-dining restaurant.
| We are | We are not |
|---|---|
| Friendly and direct | Overly cute or full of puns |
| Confident about our craft | Snobbish about other bread |
| Specific: hours, grains, temperatures | Vague: "the finest ingredients" |
Do and don't
Do: "Rye is back! Out of the oven at 7:30, usually gone by noon." Don't: "Indulge in our exquisite artisanal rye experience."
Do: "Sorry, the seeded loaf sold out today. We'll bake two extra trays tomorrow." Don't: "Due to high demand, this product is currently unavailable."
Do: "Our starter is eleven years old and still going strong." Don't: "Heritage leaven crafted with passion since 2015."
Words we use
fresh this morning, slow-fermented, from our oven, neighbours, sold out
Words we avoid
artisanal, exquisite, premium, indulge, curated
Client: Hearth & Loaf, a neighbourhood sourdough bakery with two shops and a weekend market stall.
客戶與所有細節皆為虛構。
關於此服務
教會要同時面對來了多年的會友,以及第一次走進來、往往不知道會遇到什麼的訪客。我們為您的教會或事工撰寫訊息指南:如何用淺顯的話描述您是誰、相信什麼,如何歡迎新朋友,以及週報、網站與社群貼文應有的語氣。您的神學與傳統由您決定;我們協助以清楚、溫暖的語言表達。
包含內容
- 您會收到一份書面訊息指南:包含聚會、網站與社群貼文的語氣規則與範例、訪客的歡迎用語,並依方案提供使命、願景與價值觀的陳述,以及色彩與字體。這是書面指南,並非視覺品牌手冊。
- 語氣規則對會友與訪客都溫暖而清楚
- 歡迎用語適用於初次來訪者,線上與實體皆可
- 內部用語教會術語加以解釋或替換
- 使命與願景標準版起:可重複使用的簡短陳述
- 色彩與字體進階版:適用於投影片、週報與網站
服務流程
- 1需求說明您說明教會與會友
- 2策略與撰寫我們訂定語氣並撰寫範例
- 3交付提供指南,並可要求修改
需要您提供的資料
您的教會或事工、宗派或傳統、您服事的對象、新朋友常問的問題,以及您已在使用的任何陳述。
我們會詢問您:
- 您的教會或事工是什麼?屬於哪個傳統?
- 您最希望接觸到哪些人?
- 新朋友通常會問什麼?
- 您是否已有信仰告白或使命陳述?
比較方案
付款保障
下單時付款,但只有在驗收成果後,款項才會撥付。
- 固定價格付款後,方案價格不會變動。
- 款項先行保留付款時,金額只會先保留,在您驗收後才會撥付給服務。
- 交付前檢查每份成果在交到您手上之前都會經過品質檢查,您也可以在驗收前於訂單頁面查看成果。
- 免費修改在需求說明範圍內,可依方案允許的次數提出修改。
- 3 天後自動驗收若您在交付後 3 天內未驗收也未提出修改,成果將自動驗收。若您在交付後於訂單聊天室留言,訂單會暫停自動驗收;我們回覆後,可能會重新起算 3 天,並會在聊天室中告知。
- 重新製作或全額退款若成果不符合您的需求說明且修改後仍未改善,或製作時間超過交付期限的兩倍,請在訂單聊天室留言:我們將重新製作,或全額退還款項。
常見問題
你們會更動我們的信仰告白嗎?
不會。我們會保留您提供的教義用詞,只在周圍建議更淺顯的說明。
可以涵蓋我們的社群媒體嗎?
可以,範例包含貼文、活動公告與留言回覆。
適合小型會眾嗎?
適合,基本版指南簡短實用,是為負責週報與頁面的志工所寫。
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