成果範例
Proofreading: annual report of a community garden association
Before and after (excerpt)
Before:
This year the garden welcomed 23 new members, and our waiting list have grown to 41 familys. Thanks to a council grant of £2,400 we replaced the old shed, it's roof had been leaking since 2023. Volunteers put in over 1.200 hours, a new record! The composting area was moved behind plot 14, which means the paths along plots 12-16 is now clear for wheelchairs. Special thanks goes to Margret Hale who organised the Spring Plant sale.
After:
This year the garden welcomed 23 new members, and our waiting list has grown to 41 families. Thanks to a council grant of £2,400, we replaced the old shed; its roof had been leaking since 2023. Volunteers put in over 1,200 hours, a new record! The composting area was moved behind plot 14, which means the paths along plots 12–16 are now clear for wheelchairs. Special thanks go to Margaret Hale, who organised the spring plant sale.
List of changes (excerpt)
| # | Paragraph | Was | Now | Type |
|---|---|---|---|---|
| 1 | 2 | waiting list have grown | waiting list has grown | Grammar: agreement |
| 2 | 2 | familys | families | Spelling |
| 3 | 2 | grant of £2,400 we | grant of £2,400, we | Punctuation |
| 4 | 2 | shed, it's roof | shed; its roof | Punctuation; its/it's |
| 5 | 2 | 1.200 hours | 1,200 hours | Number format |
| 6 | 2 | plots 12-16 is | plots 12–16 are | Dash in range; agreement |
| 7 | 2 | thanks goes | thanks go | Grammar |
| 8 | 2 | Margret Hale | Margaret Hale | Name: spelled "Margaret" on p. 1 and p. 4 |
| 9 | 2 | Spring Plant sale | spring plant sale | Capitalisation, as elsewhere in the report |
Consistency check across the whole report
- Names: "Margaret Hale" (4 times), "Tom Okoye" (3), "Priya Shah" (2), all now spelled the same way everywhere
- Organisation name: "Elm Street Community Garden" used in full the first time, then "the garden"; 3 cases of "Elm St. Garden" changed
- Spelling: British throughout ("organised", "colour", "programme"); 7 American forms changed
- Numbers: thousands with a comma, ranges with an en dash; amounts checked against the finance table on page 5, all match
Not changed (for you to decide)
- Paragraph 6 says "nearly 50 volunteers"; the table on page 5 lists 46. Both can be correct, so we left the wording.
- "Potluck" appears both with and without a hyphen in quotes from members; quotes were kept as written.
Total: 2,684 words checked, 57 corrections.
Client: Elm Street Community Garden, a volunteer-run association with 80 members Text: the 2,700-word annual report for members and the local council Brief: fix errors only, keep the friendly voice; use British spelling; plot numbers and amounts must stay exactly as given
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關於此服務
在健康內容中，拼錯藥名、混淆單位，或把「mg」寫成「mcg」，都不只是錯字而已。我們校對文章、病人衛教單張與診所頁面的拼寫、文法與標點，讓藥名、劑量與單位的寫法一致，並標註與其餘內容看似不一致的數字。我們檢查的是語言，而非醫學：臨床事實與建議仍由您負責。
包含內容
- 您會收到修正後的文字，附修改清單，以及另列需確認的劑量、單位與用語標註清單，提供於訂單頁面及 Word（.docx）檔案。
- 藥名與疾病名稱全文拼寫一致
- 單位與劑量符號、間距與小數點一致
- 縮寫首次出現時展開全名
- 標註數字與其他處不符的數字
- 讓病人容易閱讀修正錯字與破碎的句子
服務流程
- 1需求說明您寄來文字與讀者對象
- 2校對我們修正語言並檢查用語
- 3交付提供乾淨的文字與標註清單
需要您提供的資料
貼上或以含文字層的 PDF、Word 檔案附上的文字、讀者對象（病人或專業人員），以及您使用的任何風格指南。
我們會詢問您：
- 誰會閱讀這份文字？
- 您是否遵循風格指南？
- 藥名要用學名、商品名，還是兩者並列？
- 文字使用哪種語言變體？
比較方案
付款保障
下單時付款，但只有在驗收成果後，款項才會撥付。
- 固定價格付款後，方案價格不會變動。
- 款項先行保留付款時，金額只會先保留，在您驗收後才會撥付給服務。
- 交付前檢查每份成果在交到您手上之前都會經過品質檢查，您也可以在驗收前於訂單頁面查看成果。
- 免費修改在需求說明範圍內，可依方案允許的次數提出修改。
- 3 天後自動驗收若您在交付後 3 天內未驗收也未提出修改，成果將自動驗收。若您在交付後於訂單聊天室留言，訂單會暫停自動驗收；我們回覆後，可能會重新起算 3 天，並會在聊天室中告知。
- 重新製作或全額退款若成果不符合您的需求說明且修改後仍未改善，或製作時間超過交付期限的兩倍，請在訂單聊天室留言：我們將重新製作，或全額退還款項。
常見問題
你們會檢查醫學資訊是否正確嗎？
不會。我們修正語言並標註看似不一致的數字，但不會查證臨床事實。這並非醫療建議。
會把文字簡化給病人閱讀嗎？
校對會保留您的用詞。如果您需要較簡易的版本，請選擇我們的改寫服務。
可以寄病人衛教單張的 PDF 嗎？
可以，只要 PDF 含有文字層。掃描的單張則可改寄清晰的照片。
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